replying on Living Conditions by Christof
25 Oct 2002, 7:10 AM
Well thank you, though I tend to steer clear of Dylan Thomas - and the Beckett reference is interesting. Glad you like it!
on Drinker's Haiku by cacophony
25 Oct 2002, 6:19 AM
Not bad at all!
on My love for another. by cleverdevice
25 Oct 2002, 4:28 AM
You deliver the rhymes pretty well. 'Babbling brook' is a bit cliched. But the feelings of loss and regret and sweetly drawn.
You sad sad little boy. When you write this stuff, do you think abouth things like, for instance, the people of who are killed randomly by a sniper? I don't for a minute think that you actually find that cool. So stop writing this stuff. Unless you do find it cool, in which case please seek help before the FBI find you.
on Coloured waifs home by horus8
24 Oct 2002, 7:52 AM
Very wistful indeed, surprisingly for you. This is lovely.
replying on From a letter (never sent) by UnityMitford
23 Oct 2002, 9:01 AM
I'm in London and it's time to go home! At last. So you see, i have an excuse for my tetchiness. many apologies.
replying on From a letter (never sent) by UnityMitford
23 Oct 2002, 8:53 AM
Don't be so sensitive or you'll what?
replying on From a letter (never sent) by UnityMitford
23 Oct 2002, 8:53 AM
Ugh. Sorry. Now I'm embarrassed. It's been a long hard day and I'm taking things the wrong way. I missed the irony of your last comment.
replying on From a letter (never sent) by UnityMitford
23 Oct 2002, 8:44 AM
Yes actually, how annoying. Why call yourself Unity Mitford and come on to the site and get huffy when people try to probe you about why you have chosen that name? Assuming that people that will not heard of U Mitford as well - does it annoy you that someone actually has? Oh, why has this rattled my cage. Maybe I don't like it when I realise someone doesn't want to join in with my little game. Bleagh. But anyway. Don't be so sniffy.
replying on From a letter (never sent) by UnityMitford
23 Oct 2002, 8:39 AM
Well excuse me, some of us have heard about you from elsewhere than the Internet. Pardon me.
replying on From a letter (never sent) by UnityMitford
23 Oct 2002, 8:30 AM
You ever talk to your sisters?
replying on From a letter (never sent) by UnityMitford
23 Oct 2002, 8:26 AM
Apparently Eva was a disaster in the Alsatian and riding crop department. No wonder he was so pleased to see you. the way your combed your hair all straight and precise.... an Aryan dictator's dream.
replying on From a letter (never sent) by UnityMitford
23 Oct 2002, 8:17 AM
But he loved Eva! How could he!
replying on From a letter (never sent) by UnityMitford
23 Oct 2002, 8:13 AM
And what did you do when you got there? Did you hang out with the Fuhrer?
on The Poop Machines by dougsoderstrom
23 Oct 2002, 7:44 AM
It's a fundamental truth.
replying on America by little_angel_maria
23 Oct 2002, 7:27 AM
Not only do you need to go to school, it is illegal for your parents to prevent you. If Social Services find out about this there could be trouble. Please try and sort this out. Not wanting to sacre you unduly, but the authorities don't look on this sort of thing kindly.
replying on America by little_angel_maria
23 Oct 2002, 7:22 AM
You have talented friends.
replying on Do Swans Get Jealous? (#2) by Christof
23 Oct 2002, 6:30 AM
Not at all. It's quite unusual for someone to pick up the buried humour in my stuff, I'm glad you did.
replying on Mystery on the Bridge by vulcan
23 Oct 2002, 6:24 AM
I'd settle for a bridge or a fireplace, but I couldn't fit them in my flat.
replying on Our New Tongue by Christof
23 Oct 2002, 6:23 AM
Why thank you. This is the oldest thing I have on poemranker, and so it's very gratifying when people like it.