Re: survival of the weakest by brazen	28-Oct-02/7:37 AM
Why not?
Re: wax by New Life Drug	28-Oct-02/7:45 AM
This is indeed strange. You central idea is good and some of your images work fine, and some bits seem unformed. This wax needs a bit more shaping I think. But your concept is good.
Re: Darkness by The_Shadows_Smile	28-Oct-02/7:48 AM
If tey're walking the narrow path of light and dark, how come they're wrapped in their own darkness forever? How does that work?
Re: other by ThreeFourSix	28-Oct-02/7:49 AM
Honest. Thanks.
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Oct-02/7:58 AM
'When I rest in my divine.'Divan?
Re: Mystery on the Bridge by vulcan	28-Oct-02/7:59 AM
Why did you resubmit this? I can't see any changes... But anyway, I'll vote again.
Re: The First Poem by jrtails	28-Oct-02/8:06 AM
This is plagirised from John Cooper Calrke. Word for word, with capitals, with hyphens. See cyberspike.com, his own website. You've been rumbled my son.
Re: The First Poem by jrtails	28-Oct-02/8:06 AM
This is plagirised from John Cooper Clarke. Word for word, with capitals, with hyphens. See cyberspike.com, his own website. You've been rumbled my son. This poem should be taken off now.
Re: Held by <~>	29-Oct-02/1:44 AM
The last two lines are beautiful. You mould your life into poetry with such precision.
Re: advice for the heated by <~>	29-Oct-02/1:45 AM
This is very practical. Where do you spray it though?
Re: For Flight by <~>	29-Oct-02/1:47 AM
This is extremely fruity, z, and you know it. 'That release' ? OOh, such filth.
Re: In the Valley of Two-Dollar Pints of Red Hook IPA by <~>	29-Oct-02/1:49 AM
The last stanza - very wise!
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Oct-02/1:51 AM
It's the collected works of Blade. In a bag. With a split pig. Marvellous.
Re: Ignoranus by Yardbird	29-Oct-02/7:12 AM
Almost certainly true.
Re: Worth the wait by INTRANSIT	29-Oct-02/7:17 AM
A very tender little skech. Simple and honest. By the way, I was interested in what you said about me sounding as if I'd worked on the road - I never have. What is it about my work that makes you think I have?
Re: Are you spreading it? by Voth269	30-Oct-02/1:24 AM
Nope.
Re: boy girl by little_angel_maria	30-Oct-02/1:26 AM
This is so much better than any of your other poems - it's sweet adn funny. maybe 'Dad shoots'? Then you get a rhyme with 'scoots' and cartoon violence at the same time.
Re: betsy's hands by onepinksock	30-Oct-02/1:35 AM
Evocative, especially the stuff about clay and glass.
Re: In the Quiet of the Night a Tree Gently Shakes by Nicholas Jones	30-Oct-02/7:35 AM
As Keats said, as poems do not come as easily as leaves to the tress, you might as well not bother. This is very good.
Re: My Feet by smallsun	30-Oct-02/7:38 AM
How did your feet protect you? Are they large and cast from iron?