| Re: Ignoranus by Yardbird |
29-Oct-02/7:12 AM |
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| Re: betsy's hands by onepinksock |
30-Oct-02/1:35 AM |
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Evocative, especially the stuff about clay and glass.
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| Re: Are you spreading it? by Voth269 |
30-Oct-02/1:24 AM |
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| Re: My Feet by smallsun |
30-Oct-02/7:38 AM |
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How did your feet protect you? Are they large and cast from iron?
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| Re: other by ThreeFourSix |
28-Oct-02/7:49 AM |
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| Re: boy girl by little_angel_maria |
30-Oct-02/1:26 AM |
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This is so much better than any of your other poems - it's sweet adn funny. maybe 'Dad shoots'? Then you get a rhyme with 'scoots' and cartoon violence at the same time.
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| Re: In the Quiet of the Night a Tree Gently Shakes by Nicholas Jones |
30-Oct-02/7:35 AM |
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As Keats said, as poems do not come as easily as leaves to the tress, you might as well not bother. This is very good.
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| Re: advice for the heated by <~> |
29-Oct-02/1:45 AM |
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This is very practical. Where do you spray it though?
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| Re: For Flight by <~> |
29-Oct-02/1:47 AM |
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This is extremely fruity, z, and you know it. 'That release' ? OOh, such filth.
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| Re: In the Valley of Two-Dollar Pints of Red Hook IPA by <~> |
29-Oct-02/1:49 AM |
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The last stanza - very wise!
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| Re: Held by <~> |
29-Oct-02/1:44 AM |
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The last two lines are beautiful. You mould your life into poetry with such precision.
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29-Oct-02/1:51 AM |
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It's the collected works of Blade. In a bag. With a split pig. Marvellous.
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| Re: Mystery on the Bridge by vulcan |
28-Oct-02/7:59 AM |
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Why did you resubmit this? I can't see any changes... But anyway, I'll vote again.
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| Re: Worth the wait by INTRANSIT |
29-Oct-02/7:17 AM |
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A very tender little skech. Simple and honest. By the way, I was interested in what you said about me sounding as if I'd worked on the road - I never have. What is it about my work that makes you think I have?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
28-Oct-02/7:58 AM |
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'When I rest in my divine.'Divan?
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| Re: The First Poem by jrtails |
28-Oct-02/8:06 AM |
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This is plagirised from John Cooper Calrke. Word for word, with capitals, with hyphens. See cyberspike.com, his own website. You've been rumbled my son.
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| Re: The First Poem by jrtails |
28-Oct-02/8:06 AM |
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This is plagirised from John Cooper Clarke. Word for word, with capitals, with hyphens. See cyberspike.com, his own website. You've been rumbled my son. This poem should be taken off now.
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| Re: wax by New Life Drug |
28-Oct-02/7:45 AM |
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This is indeed strange. You central idea is good and some of your images work fine, and some bits seem unformed. This wax needs a bit more shaping I think. But your concept is good.
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| Re: Darkness by The_Shadows_Smile |
28-Oct-02/7:48 AM |
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If tey're walking the narrow path of light and dark, how come they're wrapped in their own darkness forever? How does that work?
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| Re: survival of the weakest by brazen |
28-Oct-02/7:37 AM |
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