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Dovina replying on Reincarnation by Dovina 20 Apr 2005, 8:05 AM
At age 78, the new pope can't last long. I think it's a giving-in to old dogma just long enough to gain the support needed for a pope with sense. Declining mass attendance, in Ireland for example, should help to this end.
Dovina on Baggage (3rd ending) by INTRANSIT 20 Apr 2005, 7:58 AM
I like the crosses: genes/jeans, baggage/DNA. Think it would sound less didactic and more homely if you replaced all the "we"'s with "I" or Jonney or the new pope, zodiac, whatever.
Dovina replying on Sudden Change by Dovina 20 Apr 2005, 7:52 AM
Get some rest, or head for Damascus, get a load of Christians, haul them to Rome, or well, try to.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Reincarnation by Dovina 20 Apr 2005, 7:51 AM
It's hardly surprising they elected a fundamentalist. Whenever there's the slightest hint that people are better off following more liberal doctrines, the church recoils in on itself, doing everything in its power to hinder what can only be described by Sensibles as "moral progress." Eventually, when enough people have died of the AIDS, and enough ethnics get parped to the max by over-population, the church's stance on issues such as contraception will become so blatantly harmful, and so blatantly ridiculous, that further resistance becomes counter-productive, and then some radical new Pope Dave will come along and say "Hey guys! You can wear rubber johnnies!" and we'd be like "Yeah we already do, you prick. The ones who didn't are all dead."
INTRANSIT on f*ckyouoldmenandyourrules by Damien_ 20 Apr 2005, 7:44 AM
I begin to stupify. ruh. Please add me to the list of Damien haters. Thank you.
INTRANSIT on Hamlet's Horniness by Sashaclese 20 Apr 2005, 7:38 AM
THAT'S entertainment.
INTRANSIT on ab*defg by Goad 20 Apr 2005, 7:27 AM
Wrapped for my protection. Ha! I needed a good laugh. two full hands.
INTRANSIT on Sudden Change by Dovina 20 Apr 2005, 7:21 AM
Paul, of Le Bible, No? Been to Dallas. Then Houston. Now Amarillo, going to Seattle. Phew! i'm beat.
Damien replying on Trying to get signed? by Damien 20 Apr 2005, 7:19 AM
Oh yeah Zodiac, just checked out your recent comments. I belive you have no right to say anything to anyone, most of your comments were full of offensive irellivent (sorry for spelling) remarks. I notice you enjoy putting people down (wow what an assumption) and love a good argument (another assumption? I'me getting good). heres a few extracts, also I think people should check your voting history, you have an average of 6.25 or something. Utterly discusting. Congratulations, this is the man you just called a brainiac: http://rockmage.com/biograp... Get bored and leave soon. Re: 15 Minute poem by Damien* 18-Apr-05/10:37 PM Just think how much better this poem would have been if you'd spent 30 minutes on it instead of 15. What were you so busy doing that you couldn't spend another fifteen minutes and made it twice as good? I'll bet you were whacking off to either the blonde daughter or the gothish daughter, or both, on Rosanne. Re: Snap by rockmage 17-Apr-05/6:07 AM "rotates a swirl", what? Do you really mean something like "swirls a swirl" or "spins a spin"? Seems like a waste of precious haikullables to me. Re: Why The Spinning Top Appears Too Beautiful To Touch by PsydewaysTears 17-Apr-05/6:05 AM Drop the line at the end if you want this to even start being considered as a real poem. Also, write about a real situation. I know you think you are, but you're not. Make your hero/narrator/whatever walking somewhere, doing something, having a realistic conversation - something to tie things together and be more than just whatever goth cliches popped into your head as you were writing. So you've got a dinner party in there somewhere; use that. Start with a person cleaning stains out of the carpet. Really. Start with the line, "She/he scrubbed stains in the carpet" and go from there. Drop 90% of the lines in this poem that aren't about getting ready for dinner parties. I'm absolutely serious. Even Eliot made his rambling egos WALKING somewhere. Re: Reincarnation by Dovina 17-Apr-05/6:00 AM Not to be irrelevant, but I've always wondered what's the point of reincarnating if you don't remember your past lives. Do you think some people do? If not, how do you think a past self affects somebody's present self? If it doesn't (or doesn't much), isn't it pretty much the same thing as not being reincarnated?
Damien on A new leaf by Damien 20 Apr 2005, 6:37 AM
Before the comments begin I can virtually gaurantee Goad and Zodiac will be here ready to Point my flaws out. So if you dont understand this poem its probably because it is not understandable? Good luck Goad and Zodiac the critques of the future.
Damien replying on Trying to get signed? by Damien 20 Apr 2005, 6:30 AM
Here you go again. Zodiac I have read your poetry, Its good, I like your style, I want to be friends. Are you a skitsophrenic (how I think its spelt) as you have offered some very constructive comments. Say what you want just please stop replying like this is a fucking argument.
Dovina replying on Middle-Aged White Woman by Dovina 20 Apr 2005, 5:38 AM
2) I have a lot of experience with blacks and my ways of talking about them are more appropriate than yours because I understand them better.
eliznhaz on f*ckyouoldmenandyourrules by Damien_ 20 Apr 2005, 5:20 AM
this is a excellent poem just great i love it
Damien replying on Utensils of creation by Damien 20 Apr 2005, 3:06 AM
OK: Seeken spiritual development classes attended Karate classes Read lots of self help books Practiced Nunchucks at home Practised Bokken at home Read a great book once "understanding the subconcsious" Pass the same homeless person on the way to work and give him something from the shop every time. Really this is silly. Who are we proving ourselves to.
zodiac replying on Trying to get signed? by Damien 20 Apr 2005, 3:03 AM
You're a spaz. This is all things YOU'VE SAID.
Damien replying on Trying to get signed? by Damien 20 Apr 2005, 2:56 AM
What pahtetic rambling for an adult.
zodiac replying on Trying to get signed? by Damien 20 Apr 2005, 2:51 AM
Oh. I don't see why you'd want to be. And you're not, as far as I know, a bamboon anyway. But hey, thanks. Now Damien can think I just made this all up.
ho_hum replying on 15 Minute poem by Damien 20 Apr 2005, 2:48 AM
GHASTLY
ho_hum replying on My Dumb Choice...YOU by sonawrote 20 Apr 2005, 2:47 AM
Spelling young man. Aloud: With use of the voice; orally. Allowed: To let do or happen; permit. Which of these do you think best fits your comment?
ho_hum replying on f*ckyouoldmenandyourrules by Damien_ 20 Apr 2005, 2:43 AM
I pretty much agree, quite a talented young man. The problem being that those who wish to imitate him only see the angry young man type stuff and don't explicitly pay attention to the elegance with which it is constructed. Hence you get loads of angry teenagers thinking that if they shout 'fuck' enough times someone will give them a record deal.