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My Dumb Choice...YOU (Free verse) by sonawrote I fu*ked up!
I chose your stupid ass
cheap bastard
always money there for u
but never what I need
just bare necessities
nothing more
never
unromantic, selfish
never think of anyone
but yourself
what you want
what you need
or so you think
maybe Iâll grow guts
and leave for real
not just say it
again and again
with no change
in your actions
occasionally sweet
to get your way
with me
cheap bastard
even with your heart
I canât stomach it anymore
I fu*ked up!
Up the ladder:
Jesus Around Your Neck (Final Version)
Down the ladder:
Sawdust
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Posted: August 12, 2004 9:05 AM PDT; Last modified: August 12, 2004 9:05 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.880797 Overall Rank: 10080 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 163.1.146.135
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12-Aug-04/9:55 AM
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Bulgingly stupid.
Ok, please explain this c -> * for me.
You're choosing to use the word fuck in something you wrote. You're posting it on a board that has absolutely no censorship, ever. WHAT. is. the. purpose. of spelling it fu*k instead of fuck? What does it accomplish? what does it do for you? I'm genuinely curious. Is there something really really wrong or politically incorrect with the letter c, that I'm just not aware of?
Can you say something good about anything.
You Fu"kin P"ss T"king B"astard. Are we aloud to use " oh great Goad.
"Can you say something good about anything.
" --yes, and I do. You wouldn't know anything about it though, because you never bothered to look at anybody's posting history to get an idea of what they were about before you started pissing on them. (Or licking their ass, for that matter, lol. lolololol. lol.)
"Lick my ass" is the fiercest and most commonly used Arabic cussword. The next fiercest/most-common is, "God willing, you'll shit oil."
Spelling young man.
Aloud: With use of the voice; orally. Allowed: To let do or happen; permit. Which of these do you think best fits your comment? 243 view(s)
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