Re: I sat beside the night by Niphredil	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.72	16-May-05/7:15 PM
I read them all. Have my rights as a human being been revoked? It sure feels like it.
Re: dit da haiku by nentwined	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.72	16-May-05/7:04 PM
glad to see your dad pop in and out from time to time. look at the inversion dad pop. hmmmm.
Re: a comment on Bookends by INTRANSIT	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.204	16-May-05/6:47 PM
I'm sure I will have some O'Hara at some point. Thanks for giving it an eye-sweep.
Re: Crossing the Mojave by INTRANSIT	SupremeDreamer 216.99.240.166	16-May-05/6:45 PM
This one my friend stumbles, and stuggles to fit the form. That, and also one is left wondering: "what is the meaning or signifigance of the desert plant agave?" Be blessed by the angels of seven.
Re: Sins of convenience by sunset sky	SupremeDreamer 216.99.240.166	16-May-05/6:19 PM
I'm reminded of my mother. And of my father.. and again of the circumstances of their polar coupling. VileCandyMeLikesAndFears. Lick, nibble, withdraw, consume with passionate gluttony.
Re: a comment on Complex Composition by al-naafiysh	al-naafiysh 204.215.33.201	16-May-05/5:44 PM
Thanks D. I am glad you like it.
Re: Fate by Fayt	SupremeDreamer 66.2.5.40	16-May-05/5:13 PM
Fuck fate, manifest your own destiny and steal the devils luck.
Re: a comment on wretched by Dental Panic	Dental Panic 84.31.86.195	16-May-05/4:57 PM
Thank you. The gipsy told me smoking will kill me - I'll light up, die reading.
Re: Mother by Jeremi B. Handrinos	SupremeDreamer 66.2.5.40	16-May-05/4:27 PM
It has been awhile since last I read your work or even checked the ranker, and it looks like your style has evolved/changed quite a bit.
Re: a comment on Complex Composition by al-naafiysh	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	16-May-05/4:11 PM
What's he look like when he hands out a 10?...
Re: wretched by Dental Panic	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.72	16-May-05/3:34 PM
Judging by the quality of the poem, I'd say the only defect is the title. Welcome. keep your head about you. Some carry Louisville Sluggers. Others, X-ray machines.
Re: Bookends by INTRANSIT	Dental Panic 84.31.86.195	16-May-05/3:13 PM
I'm not going to vote on poetry, ever - but I like this one. It's a bit hypographic and you should buy O'Hara.
Re: a comment on dit da haiku by nentwined	nentwined 64.60.192.130	16-May-05/1:26 PM
I expect nothing, though honestly I was starting to worry with all the high votes on other recent submissions.
Re: Meters of my destiny by Bhuwan	Dovina 69.175.32.185	16-May-05/1:10 PM
You're kidding?
Re: dit da haiku by nentwined	Dovina 69.175.32.185	16-May-05/1:08 PM
You're doing a great job with Poemranker, but if you expect a crowd-joining high vote for this, think again.
Re: a comment on Baggage (3rd ending) by INTRANSIT	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.138	16-May-05/1:04 PM
I looked for " lock-knee" Ankylosing was the closest I could find. I think this IS the ending the poem needs.
Re: a comment on Baggage (3rd ending) by INTRANSIT	Dovina 69.175.32.185	16-May-05/12:59 PM
I like the genes/jeans thing, but why use such a medical term in the last line when stiff or grating would do? I think that is the question.
Re: I want to know what a lifes like.... by Damien	Dovina 69.175.32.185	16-May-05/12:54 PM
This looks like a response to someone who said, "Get a life." Maybe you should change the title to that.
Re: Complex Composition by al-naafiysh	Dovina 69.175.32.185	16-May-05/12:50 PM
This is quite good and a situation I can relate to. It's nice to be with someone who is "afraid of me intellectually," but nicer to banter with someone as an equal or where I'm slightly inferior. Don't worry about rockmage. When he gives you a 5, he likes your work.
Re: Old Lady and The Sea by Joe-joe	Dovina 69.175.32.185	16-May-05/12:43 PM
I want to think this is about an old woman. I guess I can if I want. And for that a 9.