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Complex Composition (Ode) by al-naafiysh
Lost in a reverie, thoughts somewhat fluid
anticupation causes my being translucent
visibly you are feeling me but mentally
you are in fear of me... it is what I see
I am sensing you are afraid of me intellectually
I have fallen to the seventh degree so easily
loving every inch of your soul undeniable
I
Am
In
Control
Of
This
Expertly manipulating the forces of my destiny
while emotionally your intent is undressing me
inviting me to lie in your bed of conquest
to conduct your anatomical exploration of my
complex composition
My lips speak truth as your ears fail to listen
or have you lost the God sense and forgotten
I
AM
In
Control
Of
This
My composition complexity
eliminates your ideas of sexing me
falsified affections see
they have no place in the realm of me
there will be no "we"
no "me" ensnared in your web of deceit
See this one is completely complex
a complex composition asking who wants next?
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.976287
Overall Rank: 8268
Posted: May 3, 2005 2:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 16, 2005 6:31 AM PDT
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Don't worry about rockmage. When he gives you a 5, he likes your work.