ingwa
replying on Just a perfect day (Haiku) by ingwa
19 May 2005, 1:47 AM
Intransit, thank you very much for your kind words. I'm pleased you enjoyed and thanks for reading.
I don't think haiku should have something to give away. The universe is not to be tricked. Then again, I don't have a real taste for haiku. They're a bit like sushi to me - I'll aways look around for more.
Not necessarily...I was originally thinking having the clouds dissipating would be better. Then I chickened out. Endings. My Achilles' heel.
Ah, the title...suddenly I see it in a different light. I'll upgrade the vote
Is it a disappointment because the title is a bit of a giveaway maybe?
Last line is a bit of a disappointment. I know; it's a haiku. Nevertheless, nevertheless...
Works for me.
Echos of my Poem on a face. But MUCH better.
Fraser Allonby Q.C.
can get no flange just arse d'you see
yet being a poor unfortunate sort
his bournville bar was made too short
there's scarcely enough to tickle the rim
Of any Gaylord's manly quim
A. Of course it struggles. It's walking tattered terrain you grebe.
2. He talkw with agave because he's NUTSO ! Like me.
And K. The seven is quite generous. 10-Q
10!
Yep!
In what way is it a "possibility"? Give details of your modal semantics.
Dovina? Is there something I'm not seeing or maybe not hearing here? She says she's read before and she's being published in an anthology soon. I'm wondering how. And to you, Ingwa, I mean no harm by this. I'm trying to turn the poetry diamond to see a new
facet or flaw. Flaws, mind you, are not necessarily bad. They make each gem more identifiable.
"caulking" and "caulked" are correct spellings, dummy.
Not very well. Sorry again.
Um, if I expressed my relationship in a noncerebral fashion, it would probably come out something like JUASDJnASJAWEUUMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
DAMN!
All the lions are clawing at your guts right now, because they can't stand the fact that your work is more sincere than theirs. Thanks for remaining Un-pretentious. Hopefully they will start to pay more attention to the cocks up THEIR asses!!!
You are my favorite Poemranker poet, at this time. Why? Because you are just HONEST...