Re: a comment on Just a perfect day (Haiku) by ingwa	ingwa 212.135.253.244	19-May-05/1:47 AM
Intransit, thank you very much for your kind words. I'm pleased you enjoyed and thanks for reading.
Re: Transition by INTRANSIT	Dental Panic 84.31.86.195	18-May-05/11:56 PM
I don't think haiku should have something to give away. The universe is not to be tricked. Then again, I don't have a real taste for haiku. They're a bit like sushi to me - I'll aways look around for more.
Re: a comment on Transition by INTRANSIT	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.204	18-May-05/7:34 PM
Not necessarily...I was originally thinking having the clouds dissipating would be better. Then I chickened out. Endings. My Achilles' heel.
Re: a comment on Transition by INTRANSIT	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	18-May-05/7:22 PM
Ah, the title...suddenly I see it in a different light. I'll upgrade the vote
Re: a comment on Transition by INTRANSIT	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.204	18-May-05/7:18 PM
Is it a disappointment because the title is a bit of a giveaway maybe?
Re: Transition by INTRANSIT	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	18-May-05/7:05 PM
Last line is a bit of a disappointment. I know; it's a haiku. Nevertheless, nevertheless...
Re: Just a perfect day (Haiku) by ingwa	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.72	18-May-05/6:08 PM
Works for me.
Re: visitor by Dental Panic	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.72	18-May-05/6:05 PM
Echos of my Poem on a face. But MUCH better.
Re: How to treat young ladies by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	Hallmark 129.12.235.73	18-May-05/3:28 PM
Fraser Allonby Q.C. can get no flange just arse d'you see yet being a poor unfortunate sort his bournville bar was made too short there's scarcely enough to tickle the rim Of any Gaylord's manly quim
Re: a comment on Crossing the Mojave by INTRANSIT	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.138	18-May-05/1:41 PM
A. Of course it struggles. It's walking tattered terrain you grebe. 2. He talkw with agave because he's NUTSO ! Like me. And K. The seven is quite generous. 10-Q
Re: a comment on Anniversary by Hallmark	Hallmark 129.12.235.73	18-May-05/12:47 PM
10!
Re: a comment on Get well soon by Hallmark	Hallmark 129.12.235.73	18-May-05/12:44 PM
Yep!
Re: a comment on Nesting Instinct of Women by Dovina	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 82.39.22.33	18-May-05/10:47 AM
In what way is it a "possibility"? Give details of your modal semantics.
Re: a comment on Panthera pardus by ingwa	INTRANSIT 152.163.100.138	18-May-05/9:13 AM
Dovina? Is there something I'm not seeing or maybe not hearing here? She says she's read before and she's being published in an anthology soon. I'm wondering how. And to you, Ingwa, I mean no harm by this. I'm trying to turn the poetry diamond to see a new facet or flaw. Flaws, mind you, are not necessarily bad. They make each gem more identifiable.
Re: a comment on Learning to Drive by jessicazee	zodiac 212.38.134.51	18-May-05/4:14 AM
"caulking" and "caulked" are correct spellings, dummy.
Re: a comment on Nesting Instinct of Women by Dovina	zodiac 212.38.134.51	18-May-05/4:10 AM
Not very well. Sorry again.
Re: a comment on Mid Years by Dovina	zodiac 212.38.134.51	18-May-05/4:09 AM
Um, if I expressed my relationship in a noncerebral fashion, it would probably come out something like JUASDJnASJAWEUUMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMUUUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMUUUUUUUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMMMMMMMMmm. Forgive me for showing our readers a little more consideration. Besides, the cerebral stuff makes the noncerebral stuff possible. Bet after godknowshowmany relationships you still didn't know that.
Re: Malice In Wonderland (edited) by Caducus	Plaidypus 198.7.247.203	17-May-05/6:45 PM
DAMN!
Re: There’s A Voice Deep Inside My Head by celticskatermatt1	Plaidypus 198.7.247.203	17-May-05/6:44 PM
All the lions are clawing at your guts right now, because they can't stand the fact that your work is more sincere than theirs. Thanks for remaining Un-pretentious. Hopefully they will start to pay more attention to the cocks up THEIR asses!!!
Re: am i right? by celticskatermatt1	Plaidypus 198.7.247.203	17-May-05/6:39 PM
You are my favorite Poemranker poet, at this time. Why? Because you are just HONEST...