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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on CAN'T TAKE THE PAIN by prettyktm 21 Jul 2005, 5:07 PM

This makes me sick. How dare you sully us with the lurid details of your dumpling of a love-life? This is a poetry website, and poetry is about thoughts, feelings, and emotions. Not tawdry 'late night' shows interspersed with teenage 'menages a trois.' Great poeme though :( -10-

Nuit on The sunset sea. by darby pyn 21 Jul 2005, 4:04 PM

I like the depth of your work Darby.

ALChemy on on passing through some small town by Dental Panic 21 Jul 2005, 7:22 AM

Much better.

prettyktm replying on CAN'T TAKE THE PAIN by prettyktm 21 Jul 2005, 4:42 AM

prettyktm replying on CAN'T TAKE THE PAIN by prettyktm 21 Jul 2005, 4:41 AM

thank you so much for your comment.

zodiac replying on A Good Man Ruined by Dovina 20 Jul 2005, 11:20 PM

Then the issue isn't even really unoriginality/plagiarism, it's that you're not questioning whether something Jimmy Buffet would say is particularly wise. I personally consider this a very bad move.

jessicazee on A Good Man Ruined by Dovina 20 Jul 2005, 7:46 PM

tell me why buildable is awesome in the beginning and I will begin to care. I think you have a grand character sketch here if you give it another go.

Bankrupt_Word_Clerk on she sits back and judges me by hendrimike 20 Jul 2005, 12:38 PM

f me for reading this.

<~> on Break Free by Fayt 20 Jul 2005, 8:05 AM

and...? i want more from this.

<~> on A Good Man Ruined by Dovina 20 Jul 2005, 8:03 AM

somehow i feel this one might have been more effective written from the engineer's point of view.

<~> replying on Low Tide by somemorepoetry 20 Jul 2005, 8:02 AM

i think you're right--breaking down the technique did a disservice to this otherwise very good poem. i love the imagery you used in the it.

<~> on Let the Healing Begin by http://bandgeek 20 Jul 2005, 7:58 AM

well told.

<~> on Oh this little mouse, love by cpill 20 Jul 2005, 7:56 AM

this has a nice playful feel to it, but "i love you" feels a bit over the top.

<~> on Inoculation by bamf909 20 Jul 2005, 7:54 AM

nice elaboration on a theme.

<~> on the smallest box will do by elderking 20 Jul 2005, 7:52 AM

very nicely done.

<~> on Moving Up by jessicazee 20 Jul 2005, 7:46 AM

not sure if the promotion is to her position at home, or if she's been promoted at work. other than that, i like what you've done. but that one part could be clearer.

<~> on CAN'T TAKE THE PAIN by prettyktm 20 Jul 2005, 7:43 AM

this makes a good Lyric.

Dovina replying on A Good Man Ruined by Dovina 20 Jul 2005, 1:29 AM

I knew that, and decided to use it anyway.

hendrimike replying on matrimonal enemy by hendrimike 19 Jul 2005, 3:00 PM

i should have been born in the thirties, i guess. i'm a throwback...

Bankrupt_Word_Clerk replying on the smallest box will do by elderking 19 Jul 2005, 2:13 AM

Jade