Re: CAN'T TAKE THE PAIN by prettyktm	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.151.145.220	21-Jul-05/5:07 PM
This makes me sick. How dare you sully us with the lurid details of your dumpling of a love-life? This is a poetry website, and poetry is about thoughts, feelings, and emotions. Not tawdry 'late night' shows interspersed with teenage 'menages a trois.' Great poeme though :( -10-
Re: The sunset sea. by darby pyn	Nuit 86.128.125.194	21-Jul-05/4:04 PM
I like the depth of your work Darby.
Re: on passing through some small town by Dental Panic	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	21-Jul-05/7:22 AM
Much better.
Re: a comment on CAN'T TAKE THE PAIN by prettyktm	prettyktm 203.115.81.186	21-Jul-05/4:42 AM
Re: a comment on CAN'T TAKE THE PAIN by prettyktm	prettyktm 203.115.81.186	21-Jul-05/4:41 AM
thank you so much for your comment.
Re: a comment on A Good Man Ruined by Dovina	zodiac 212.118.19.130	20-Jul-05/11:20 PM
Then the issue isn't even really unoriginality/plagiarism, it's that you're not questioning whether something Jimmy Buffet would say is particularly wise. I personally consider this a very bad move.
Re: A Good Man Ruined by Dovina	jessicazee 152.163.100.135	20-Jul-05/7:46 PM
tell me why buildable is awesome in the beginning and I will begin to care. I think you have a grand character sketch here if you give it another go.
Re: she sits back and judges me by hendrimike	Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 69.231.21.224	20-Jul-05/12:38 PM
f me for reading this.
Re: Break Free by Fayt	<~> 167.206.181.179	20-Jul-05/8:05 AM
and...? i want more from this.
Re: A Good Man Ruined by Dovina	<~> 167.206.181.179	20-Jul-05/8:03 AM
somehow i feel this one might have been more effective written from the engineer's point of view.
Re: a comment on Low Tide by somemorepoetry	<~> 167.206.181.179	20-Jul-05/8:02 AM
i think you're right--breaking down the technique did a disservice to this otherwise very good poem. i love the imagery you used in the it.
Re: Let the Healing Begin by http://bandgeek	<~> 167.206.181.179	20-Jul-05/7:58 AM
well told.
Re: Oh this little mouse, love by cpill	<~> 167.206.181.179	20-Jul-05/7:56 AM
this has a nice playful feel to it, but "i love you" feels a bit over the top.
Re: Inoculation by bamf909	<~> 167.206.181.179	20-Jul-05/7:54 AM
nice elaboration on a theme.
Re: the smallest box will do by elderking	<~> 167.206.181.179	20-Jul-05/7:52 AM
very nicely done.
Re: Moving Up by jessicazee	<~> 167.206.181.179	20-Jul-05/7:46 AM
not sure if the promotion is to her position at home, or if she's been promoted at work. other than that, i like what you've done. but that one part could be clearer.
Re: CAN'T TAKE THE PAIN by prettyktm	<~> 167.206.181.179	20-Jul-05/7:43 AM
this makes a good Lyric.
Re: a comment on A Good Man Ruined by Dovina	Dovina 217.83.96.90	20-Jul-05/1:29 AM
I knew that, and decided to use it anyway.
Re: a comment on matrimonal enemy by hendrimike	hendrimike 70.106.117.116	19-Jul-05/3:00 PM
i should have been born in the thirties, i guess. i'm a throwback...
Re: a comment on the smallest box will do by elderking	Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 69.231.25.148	19-Jul-05/2:13 AM
Jade