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CAN'T TAKE THE PAIN (Free verse) by prettyktm Put your eyes on my face
For the last time
'Cause I'm getting out of this maze
Your love makes me feel low down
And it hurts,
I can't take the pain
I was watching
A late night show
And the wall of our room
Was changing colours
I saw you through the corner of my eye
You were not yourself
And I know why?
The words that you hide
Were making your heart heavy
Your love had vanish away from me
And you can't look at me
'Cause you love somebody,besides me
Well,if you think
I'm gonna hold you
And I'm gonna cry
No,I'm too tried
To do the same thing again
'Cause it's high time now
And I can't take the pain.
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Posted: July 20, 2005 5:15 AM PDT; Last modified: July 20, 2005 5:15 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.1986713 Overall Rank: 4598 Comments:
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20-Jul-05/7:43 AM
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this makes a good Lyric.
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prettyktm @ 203.115.81.186
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21-Jul-05/4:41 AM
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thank you so much for your comment.
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prettyktm @ 203.115.81.186
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21-Jul-05/4:42 AM
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This makes me sick. How dare you sully us with the lurid details of your dumpling of a love-life? This is a poetry website, and poetry is about thoughts, feelings, and emotions. Not tawdry 'late night' shows interspersed with teenage 'menages a trois.' Great poeme though :( -10-
Sorry for that,but love is not only the expression about love,ah
there are many other expression inculed in it.like.sadness,and I have just wrote one of the expression of it.thank you for your ah comment.take care. 187 view(s)
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