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CAN'T TAKE THE PAIN (Free verse) by prettyktm

Put your eyes on my face For the last time 'Cause I'm getting out of this maze Your love makes me feel low down And it hurts, I can't take the pain I was watching A late night show And the wall of our room Was changing colours I saw you through the corner of my eye You were not yourself And I know why? The words that you hide Were making your heart heavy Your love had vanish away from me And you can't look at me 'Cause you love somebody,besides me Well,if you think I'm gonna hold you And I'm gonna cry No,I'm too tried To do the same thing again 'Cause it's high time now And I can't take the pain.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 21-Jul-05/5:07 PM
This makes me sick. How dare you sully us with the lurid details of your dumpling of a love-life? This is a poetry website, and poetry is about thoughts, feelings, and emotions. Not tawdry 'late night' shows interspersed with teenage 'menages a trois.' Great poeme though :( -10-




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