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CAN'T TAKE THE PAIN (Free verse) by prettyktm

Put your eyes on my face For the last time 'Cause I'm getting out of this maze Your love makes me feel low down And it hurts, I can't take the pain I was watching A late night show And the wall of our room Was changing colours I saw you through the corner of my eye You were not yourself And I know why? The words that you hide Were making your heart heavy Your love had vanish away from me And you can't look at me 'Cause you love somebody,besides me Well,if you think I'm gonna hold you And I'm gonna cry No,I'm too tried To do the same thing again 'Cause it's high time now And I can't take the pain.

prettyktm 21-Jul-05/9:53 PM
Sorry for that,but love is not only the expression about love,ah
there are many other expression inculed in it.like.sadness,and I
have just wrote one of the expression of it.thank you for your ah
comment.take care.




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