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Inoculation (Other) by bamf909 A cruel needle
Can be a friend.
A stab in the arm
Could save a life.
Ghastly punctures
Are sometimes wonderful.
Blood-drawing spikes
Keep us healthy.
Dreaded syringes
Ease our troubles.
Piercing metal slivers
Are on our (in)side.
Screaming children
Owe their gratitude.
Harm, no foul.
Up the ladder:
O Death
Down the ladder:
A Cautionary Tale
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Posted: July 14, 2005 3:47 PM PDT; Last modified: July 14, 2005 3:47 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.970199 Overall Rank: 8438 Comments:
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http://bandgeek @ 216.195.164.111
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15-Jul-05/7:58 PM
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funny, you should do public health commercials
nice elaboration on a theme.
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