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Inoculation

Member since 2005 · Posted 14 Jul 2005 · 2 comments

A cruel needle Can be a friend. A stab in the arm Could save a life. Ghastly punctures Are sometimes wonderful. Blood-drawing spikes Keep us healthy. Dreaded syringes Ease our troubles. Piercing metal slivers Are on our (in)side. Screaming children Owe their gratitude. Harm, no foul.

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[8] http://bandgeek 15-Jul-05/7:58 PM Reply
funny, you should do public health commercials
[n/a] <~> 20-Jul-05/7:54 AM Reply
nice elaboration on a theme.