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Inoculation (Other) by bamf909
A cruel needle Can be a friend. A stab in the arm Could save a life. Ghastly punctures Are sometimes wonderful. Blood-drawing spikes Keep us healthy. Dreaded syringes Ease our troubles. Piercing metal slivers Are on our (in)side. Screaming children Owe their gratitude. Harm, no foul.

Up the ladder: The Chamber
Down the ladder: New Year

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8452
Posted: July 14, 2005 3:47 PM PDT; Last modified: July 14, 2005 3:47 PM PDT
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[8] http://bandgeek @ 216.195.164.111 | 15-Jul-05/7:58 PM | Reply
funny, you should do public health commercials
[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 20-Jul-05/7:54 AM | Reply
nice elaboration on a theme.
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