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Break Free (Free verse) by Fayt Silence, stretching over the vast embrace of conforming pressure
To leave the weight behind, and take the first step
Breaking free your eternal prison of a forced mind
And see the light of difference in your new home among your new kind
Up the ladder:
greymo(u)rn
Down the ladder:
Tonight (edit)
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Posted: July 19, 2005 3:43 AM PDT; Last modified: July 19, 2005 3:43 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.0397344 Overall Rank: 7111 Comments:
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i want more from this.