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Break Free

Member since 2004 · Posted 19 Jul 2005 · 1 comment

Silence, stretching over the vast embrace of conforming pressure To leave the weight behind, and take the first step Breaking free your eternal prison of a forced mind And see the light of difference in your new home among your new kind

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[n/a] <~> 20-Jul-05/8:05 AM Reply
and...?

i want more from this.