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Break Free (Free verse) by Fayt
Silence, stretching over the vast embrace of conforming pressure To leave the weight behind, and take the first step Breaking free your eternal prison of a forced mind And see the light of difference in your new home among your new kind

Up the ladder: A Fine Thread
Down the ladder: 9. The Second Life

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 7105
Posted: July 19, 2005 3:43 AM PDT; Last modified: July 19, 2005 3:43 AM PDT
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[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 20-Jul-05/8:05 AM | Reply
and...?

i want more from this.
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