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Lost Soul Place (Free verse) by sonawrote
Behind these smiling eyes, and this smiling face
is a dark and scarry, lonley lost soul place
Surrounded by the faces, so many people here
but none of them know me, or the things that I fear
I can be the queen of the plastic smile
staying hidden from myself, hiding in denile
crying all alone, wondering what's wrong with me
smiling at the world, cause I don't want you to see
I'm sitting in this darkness, I just can't see the light
and I don't know if I can find the strength to fight
skeletons in my closet, at least a graveyard full
holding the door shut inside in case you try to pull
the door open to see just what there is inside
sugar coated heartache, I can't trust to confide
with all this on my plate my tears could make a river
but a plastic coated smiles is what I will deliver
because....
behind these smiling eyes, of this smiling face
is a dark and scarry, lonley lost soul place.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 7060
Posted: September 24, 2007 11:33 AM PDT; Last modified: September 24, 2007 11:34 AM PDT
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