Re: a comment on Strength by Dovina	Dovina 69.92.13.105	8-Sep-05/11:56 AM
No, because she is a self-controlled person who holds her rage. I am not so self-controlled.
Re: Beneath The Undertow by longships	Crakyamuni 131.252.231.75	8-Sep-05/11:00 AM
Whats with the boats, and water stuff? Television is taking over your minds. Mankinds number one poison, TV. I'm affected, goddamn I'm affected.
Re: The Scout by wilco	Crakyamuni 131.252.231.75	8-Sep-05/10:56 AM
It's interesting to see natures reactions to our debauchery. The image of the wolves retaking the land strikes very poignantly, check out my edit of modern death. It's been changed quite a bit.
Re: a comment on Stop stalking me, eventually by T. Jonathron Remp	T. Jonathron Remp 128.252.229.185	8-Sep-05/10:47 AM
he took my panda
Re: a comment on modern death(Debuffeted) by Crakyamuni	Crakyamuni 131.252.231.75	8-Sep-05/10:39 AM
Thanks. It's interesting to see , at least in my perception, a parralell to your last submission, "Scout", in this piece o mine. Perhaps New Orleans really has effected us all, no doubt in me. Your comments are always appreciated, I respect your work. I'm not certain what this needs, outside of the obvious hack lines, which scream out in pain. I know nothing of poems, many will agree.
Re: Beneath The Undertow by longships	zodiac 86.108.16.59	8-Sep-05/5:30 AM
Did the undertow tow him to somewhere beneath the undertow? How odd. How?
Re: a comment on My Dad's Armchair. by Bethy	7!3 219.95.9.227	8-Sep-05/5:30 AM
i think it's lovely the way it is, though...
Re: a comment on this has happened more than a few times by ay deee	zodiac 86.108.16.59	8-Sep-05/4:39 AM
If I had nothing to judge a person's personality by except this poem, and were forced at gunpoint to say whether I thought this person were insane or not, I'd say insane. Definitely insane.
Re: a comment on Stardust by TLRufener	zodiac 86.108.16.59	8-Sep-05/4:26 AM
Really? Amazon.com returns 213 results, including versions by Rod Stewart, Dave Brubeck, Willie Nelson, and a man named Hoagy Carmichael.
Re: a comment on Strength by Dovina	zodiac 86.108.16.59	8-Sep-05/4:22 AM
No. The amount that she disapproves doesn't appear to necessitate raging. At least, not if you assume she isn't raging. Maybe you don't, but then the poem just kind of evaporates, doesn't it?
Re: a comment on First Love by Dovina	zodiac 86.108.16.59	8-Sep-05/4:18 AM
Oh. Remind me again, what's this conversation about?
Re: a comment on ANALYZE THIS by drnick	drnick 24.176.22.254	7-Sep-05/11:15 PM
It is, just in a language yet to be created.
Re: Cat Poem by MacFrantic	wilco 66.61.101.130	7-Sep-05/9:00 PM
Hmm, I hate cats too but I don't know if I'd go that far..still a good poem though.
Re: a comment on the birds are still here by ay deee	ay deee 24.255.87.123	7-Sep-05/8:33 PM
thank you very much.
Re: a comment on the lips of your mouth by silvertongueddevil	Tintagiles 142.166.234.130	7-Sep-05/8:18 PM
Presuming that this is addressed to a lady, there are a couple of other sets of lips he could be writing about...
Re: Baudelaire: The Albatross by Sasha	Tintagiles 142.166.234.130	7-Sep-05/8:13 PM
For a translation insisting to rhyme, this is very good. One small wince is that in your version it sounds like it's only the crew of one ship that would do this, while in the original it's any old bunch of sailors.
Re: the birds are still here by ay deee	Tintagiles 142.166.234.130	7-Sep-05/8:10 PM
Hee hee. That's lovely.
Re: a comment on Stardust by TLRufener	Tintagiles 142.166.234.130	7-Sep-05/8:08 PM
Ah. Right. Makes rather more sense thus.
Re: Untitled by bellafuego	Tintagiles 142.166.234.130	7-Sep-05/8:07 PM
A prose poem, I take it? A bit too prosy, even for that.
Re: Strength by Dovina	Tintagiles 142.166.234.130	7-Sep-05/8:06 PM
Could stand another take.