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Crakyamuni replying on modern death(Debuffeted) by Crakyamuni 9 Sep 2005, 9:21 PM

Yes New Orleans is a sad reflection on why cartoons need to be re-embraced. We sad heart filled types are getting all Anthropomorphic on our brothers and sisters!? What the hell do cartoons have to do with anything? A schizoid moment. Can I get an assasination attempt? Amen. Tom and Jerry everyone.

ay deee on i was an ass by hendrimike 9 Sep 2005, 1:00 PM

hibernating lights!

ay deee replying on this has happened more than a few times by ay deee 9 Sep 2005, 12:52 PM

eye contact is the life blood of interaction

ay deee replying on this has happened more than a few times by ay deee 9 Sep 2005, 12:51 PM

but what specifically abut the poem would lead you to that gunpoint conclusion? =!!===- //'

ay deee replying on keys by ay deee 9 Sep 2005, 12:36 PM

no janitor here

TLRufener replying on I Love You (song) by TLRufener 9 Sep 2005, 11:39 AM

I wrote this song 5 years, and all I wanted was some CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. But I now see that you are unable to think that much. Sorry for making your small mind hurt.

terbenaw replying on Rambling by terbenaw 9 Sep 2005, 10:13 AM

Thank you for the comment, but... just omit it? I don't think it would make sense if I do that. What would you replace that phrase with in order for it to make sense?

drnick on I Love You (song) by TLRufener 9 Sep 2005, 8:05 AM

Quit ripping off of the Backstreet Boy's material...I mean, I don't blame you-they rock, but it's just not right. I wouldn't write anymore songs if I were you, there's already too much of this boring shit already.

Dovina replying on Rejuvenation by Dovina 9 Sep 2005, 6:50 AM

I'm hurt! You weren't there. Neither was Chequers - only a vacant store front across Main Street on the east side of the courthouse.

TLRufener replying on Stardust by TLRufener 8 Sep 2005, 2:34 PM

It would be a lot more helpful if you just repost the comment. Thanks.

Dovina replying on Rejuvenation by Dovina 8 Sep 2005, 1:15 PM

Alright, I'll be there.

wilco on keys by ay deee 8 Sep 2005, 1:10 PM

Oooo! Oooo! You're a janitor! I love this game...

wilco replying on Rejuvenation by Dovina 8 Sep 2005, 1:08 PM

I'll be in Memphis..I try to stay away from Dyersburg as much as possible...but hey, stay away from Chequers...that place is crusty in the worst way.

Dovina replying on Rejuvenation by Dovina 8 Sep 2005, 1:06 PM

Become a daffodil. Forget about the human race. Right now I'm about to polish my yellow steel petals and go peppily out for some leisurely shopping snd dinner. You might find me later this evening at a bar in Dyersburg, Tn.

wilco on Stardust by TLRufener 8 Sep 2005, 1:03 PM

And for a second I thought it was Willie..but alas, no. There's just nothing original here...please see my comment on...umm, one of the poems by Heather Dee as it applies here as well.

wilco on God-Damn Love by D. $ Fontera 8 Sep 2005, 12:54 PM

How is it that you can write something good ("Falling") and then post this foolishness. The Drive-By Truckers' "God Damn Lonely Love" is much better...check that out.

wilco on modern death(Debuffeted) by Crakyamuni 8 Sep 2005, 12:50 PM

mm...I liked the last line better before...

wilco on Rejuvenation by Dovina 8 Sep 2005, 12:49 PM

I like the way this flows and the sounds of it, but it's just a little peppy for me (I'm in a state of disillusionment with the human race at the moment), sooooooooo....I don't know...thats just how I feel, and as many of the whipper snappers posting on this site will tell you, feelings are the only thing that matters.

Crakyamuni on A Portrait of Antonio Machado (Edit) by Sasha 8 Sep 2005, 12:46 PM

I enjoyed this gesture of the traditional. You made me want to bust out my rosary.

wilco on Beneath The Undertow by longships 8 Sep 2005, 12:43 PM

I don't think undertow is the word you're looking for here...I don't think one could be under the undertow..maybe try something else..I don't know what, just something else....wake maybe... Otherwise, not too bad.