| Re: Life Before Birth by GregDeEgg |
tadpole 68.64.172.229 |
17-Sep-05/9:31 PM |
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| Re: Dustin by Fire_is_cool |
D. $ Fontera 207.200.116.65 |
17-Sep-05/8:28 PM |
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I didn't know you felt that way about me, but thanks. Hah!
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| Re: Divorcing Tennessee by Dovina |
Quarton 12.217.202.34 |
17-Sep-05/8:13 PM |
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A good narrative poem that tells a story. Tennessee is
a beautiful state and probably more laid back than most. This is indicated by your poem.
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| Re: a comment on Unbroken Horses by Caducus |
Quarton 12.217.202.34 |
17-Sep-05/7:55 PM |
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Not a pretty picture but life can be a bitch sometimes. Some
very good lines and I like the narrative form you chose.
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| Re: Regrets, No More by writteninskin |
Heather Dee 4.178.36.65 |
17-Sep-05/3:40 PM |
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I like this one regardless of your other comments you have recieved. Don't listen to all the negative remarks take anything constructive that they might add and leave the rest of the bull shit behind. Otherwise you will get to the point that you never will want to pick up the pencil again.
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| Re: remembering you by sapphire_rain7 |
Heather Dee 4.178.36.65 |
17-Sep-05/3:36 PM |
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I think this is rather good!
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| Re: "to do" list:accomplished by razorgrin |
Heather Dee 4.178.36.65 |
17-Sep-05/3:35 PM |
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I'm not really getting it. Nor am I really liking it.
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| Re: Leaving Song by wilco |
Quarton 12.217.202.34 |
17-Sep-05/9:52 AM |
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I can relate. Short but oh so true.
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| Re: a comment on Leaving Song by wilco |
Quarton 12.217.202.34 |
17-Sep-05/9:49 AM |
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Let's see. 2 plus 1 is only 3. You're still in trouble.
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| Re: Rapid Eye Movement by wilco |
Quarton 12.217.202.34 |
17-Sep-05/9:43 AM |
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I agree with Dan. "Nothing makes the night so lonely"
seems rather awkward. Perhaps, "Nothing mkes the dream alive" Just a thought and a ten by my reckoning.
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| Re: Awakening by Quarton |
horus8 24.130.62.63 |
17-Sep-05/9:05 AM |
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| Re: The Death of Many Octopi by tianyi |
horus8 24.130.62.63 |
17-Sep-05/9:02 AM |
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| Re: new 1 by Crakyamuni |
horus8 24.130.62.63 |
17-Sep-05/9:01 AM |
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Forked the toaster
Swallowed the medicine cabinet
Shat in hat.
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| Re: Over and Gone (Other Way Around) by Miggy |
horus8 24.130.62.63 |
17-Sep-05/8:57 AM |
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You consistently redefine novice. -=o=- Therefore you get the seedless plum.
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| Re: The Death of Many Octopi by tianyi |
Crakyamuni 63.225.80.158 |
16-Sep-05/10:45 PM |
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Viceral.
Not more much to say. ARt. subje-C---tiv--v.
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| Re: Insanity by Lifeboatman |
Crakyamuni 63.225.80.158 |
16-Sep-05/10:43 PM |
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| Re: a comment on The Death of an Octopus by tianyi |
tianyi 86.130.65.59 |
16-Sep-05/7:32 PM |
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The Villanelle's done if you're interested.
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| Re: a comment on Seekers by Dovina |
ALChemy 65.188.89.69 |
16-Sep-05/5:48 PM |
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They're not random to the beavers.
PS: Thanks for not pointing out I misspelled dam. That's pathetic even by my dyslexic standards.
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| Re: a comment on Rejuvenation by Dovina |
Dovina 72.43.65.189 |
16-Sep-05/1:04 PM |
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It's a moot arguement, and all about words, not about reality. We both know that to reproduce is the goal of man and all his organs.
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| Re: a comment on Seekers by Dovina |
Dovina 72.43.65.189 |
16-Sep-05/1:02 PM |
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Beaver dams are much more random-looking tham people dams. We can't seem to get the nack of flowing with the moment.
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