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horus8 on The Death of Many Octopi by tianyi 17 Sep 2005, 9:02 AM

lol, mullosks...

horus8 on new 1 by Crakyamuni 17 Sep 2005, 9:01 AM

Forked the toaster Swallowed the medicine cabinet Shat in hat.

horus8 on Over and Gone (Other Way Around) by Miggy 17 Sep 2005, 8:57 AM

You consistently redefine novice. -=o=- Therefore you get the seedless plum.

Crakyamuni on The Death of Many Octopi by tianyi 16 Sep 2005, 10:45 PM

Viceral. Not more much to say. ARt. subje-C---tiv--v.

Crakyamuni on Insanity by Lifeboatman 16 Sep 2005, 10:43 PM

Yu hit it on the head

tianyi replying on The Death of an Octopus by tianyi 16 Sep 2005, 7:32 PM

The Villanelle's done if you're interested.

ALChemy replying on Seekers by Dovina 16 Sep 2005, 5:48 PM

They're not random to the beavers. PS: Thanks for not pointing out I misspelled dam. That's pathetic even by my dyslexic standards.

Dovina replying on Rejuvenation by Dovina 16 Sep 2005, 1:04 PM

It's a moot arguement, and all about words, not about reality. We both know that to reproduce is the goal of man and all his organs.

Dovina replying on Seekers by Dovina 16 Sep 2005, 1:02 PM

Beaver dams are much more random-looking tham people dams. We can't seem to get the nack of flowing with the moment.

Dovina replying on Seekers by Dovina 16 Sep 2005, 1:01 PM

No, its wall is stucco, flat and plum.

Quarton replying on Creation by Quarton 16 Sep 2005, 12:25 PM

zodiac, I believe the big bang or singularity as being the beginning of evolution and resulting in humans over a period of over 13 billion years. I also believe there exist countless other universes spread out over space/time. It seems improbable that ours is the only one.

tianyi on loud clubbin by ay deee 16 Sep 2005, 10:33 AM

The relationship between thick cut rug and invisible trousers is intriguing. Do you wear the rug like a large conical skirt? I enjoyed this.

tianyi replying on oh how far are we from wilderness by tianyi 16 Sep 2005, 10:07 AM

Hahaha, that's great. Hehe. You just spoiled my own poem for me! The thing is, I probably say 'oh' a lot in real life too. And I'm a guy. You've got me questioning my sexuality.

tianyi on Unbroken Horses by Caducus 16 Sep 2005, 9:57 AM

I liked when she died face down on fresh linen. 'Beauty' was shot in the hind leg tried to stand three times but fell. But all in all not enough insight or images that will stick in my mind. It reads like hopelessly melancholic list of how crap things are. "Grandma's dead, I'm a bastard, Grandpa shot my horse, Grandpa's dead" Perhaps just focus on one of these.

tianyi replying on The Death of an Octopus by tianyi 16 Sep 2005, 9:40 AM

Thanks, im working on a Villanelle in a similar vein.

ALChemy replying on Small-town Postal Clerk Considers Inspiration by zodiac 16 Sep 2005, 9:36 AM

Try Longfellow.

ay deee on The Death of an Octopus by tianyi 16 Sep 2005, 9:34 AM

truly great sentiment

ALChemy on Creation by Quarton 16 Sep 2005, 7:55 AM

If Spock wrote poetry. Get Kirk to spice it up a little.

ALChemy on Leaving Song by wilco 16 Sep 2005, 7:47 AM

PS: Oh and God? Could you make my penis grow another inch?... Thanks God. Hey there ladies.

ALChemy on oh how far are we from wilderness by tianyi 16 Sep 2005, 7:41 AM

I like everything except all the "Ohs". Makes you sound like Dorothy in Oz.