Re: a comment on Seekers by Dovina	Dovina 72.43.65.189	16-Sep-05/1:01 PM
No, its wall is stucco, flat and plum.
Re: a comment on Creation by Quarton	Quarton 12.217.202.34	16-Sep-05/12:25 PM
zodiac, I believe the big bang or singularity as being the beginning of evolution and resulting in humans over a period of over 13 billion years. I also believe there exist countless other universes spread out over space/time. It seems improbable that ours is the only one.
Re: loud clubbin by ay deee	tianyi 86.130.65.59	16-Sep-05/10:33 AM
The relationship between thick cut rug and invisible trousers is intriguing. Do you wear the rug like a large conical skirt? I enjoyed this.
Re: a comment on oh how far are we from wilderness by tianyi	tianyi 86.130.65.59	16-Sep-05/10:07 AM
Hahaha, that's great. Hehe. You just spoiled my own poem for me! The thing is, I probably say 'oh' a lot in real life too. And I'm a guy. You've got me questioning my sexuality.
Re: Unbroken Horses by Caducus	tianyi 86.130.65.59	16-Sep-05/9:57 AM
I liked when she died face down on fresh linen. 'Beauty' was shot in the hind leg tried to stand three times but fell. But all in all not enough insight or images that will stick in my mind. It reads like hopelessly melancholic list of how crap things are. "Grandma's dead, I'm a bastard, Grandpa shot my horse, Grandpa's dead" Perhaps just focus on one of these.
Re: a comment on The Death of an Octopus by tianyi	tianyi 86.130.65.59	16-Sep-05/9:40 AM
Thanks, im working on a Villanelle in a similar vein.
Re: a comment on Small-town Postal Clerk Considers Inspiration by zodiac	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	16-Sep-05/9:36 AM
Try Longfellow.
Re: The Death of an Octopus by tianyi	ay deee 204.90.50.252	16-Sep-05/9:34 AM
truly great sentiment
Re: Creation by Quarton	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	16-Sep-05/7:55 AM
If Spock wrote poetry. Get Kirk to spice it up a little.
Re: Leaving Song by wilco	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	16-Sep-05/7:47 AM
PS: Oh and God? Could you make my penis grow another inch?... Thanks God. Hey there ladies.
Re: oh how far are we from wilderness by tianyi	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	16-Sep-05/7:41 AM
I like everything except all the "Ohs". Makes you sound like Dorothy in Oz.
Re: Seekers by Dovina	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	16-Sep-05/7:18 AM
Ironically nature is usually the inspiration for building designs. Besides if man is part of nature shouldn't manmade objects be. Aren't beaver damns part of nature. I think mankind tries to make itself more special than it is.
Re: a comment on My addict by Heather Dee	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	16-Sep-05/6:44 AM
I live just outside Charlotte. Ya some of dem folk don't speak too clirr.
Re: a comment on Seekers by Dovina	zodiac 213.186.179.179	16-Sep-05/5:39 AM
What the hell? Are you pulling my leg?
Re: a comment on Rejuvenation by Dovina	zodiac 213.186.179.179	16-Sep-05/4:30 AM
Like I said, to attract insects and birds for pollination. In that sense, they're as much a part of seed-production as beards or buttocks, especially the baboon sort. Yes, eyes were a bad example, but you wouldn't say beards have a lot of other functions, would you?
Re: a comment on oh how far are we from wilderness by tianyi	tianyi 86.130.65.59	16-Sep-05/4:18 AM
Cannery Row? *Googles* "Novel by John Steinbeck, published in 1945. Like most of Steinbeck's postwar work, Cannery Row is sentimental in tone while retaining the author's characteristic social criticism. Peopled by stereotypical good-natured bums and warm-hearted prostitutes living on the fringes of Monterey, Calif., the picaresque novel celebrates lowlifes who are poor but happy." I've never heard of it, but I'll take the extra points!
Re: a comment on Rejuvenation by Dovina	Dovina 64.179.76.131	16-Sep-05/3:48 AM
But eyes have many other functions. What other functions do flowers have?
Re: a comment on Seekers by Dovina	Dovina 64.179.76.131	16-Sep-05/3:46 AM
No, I only meant that the church is flat and erect.
Re: oh how far are we from wilderness by tianyi	zodiac 213.186.179.179	16-Sep-05/2:35 AM
Great. And you've been reading Cannery Row, too. Extra points.
Re: Creation by Quarton	zodiac 213.186.179.179	16-Sep-05/2:33 AM
You again. Do you consider the Big Bang and creation of Earth to be part of the process of evolution, or did the poem just kind of spaz out at that point?