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oh how far are we from wilderness (Free verse) by tianyi
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snake in the pool
think of its tasseled back
anemones
rockpool jelly
dripping caves
seahorses strewn on the sand
a man collects them
sack cloth
hunching along
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oh how far are we from wilderness
pressure pads on my face hour on hour
what is this life that we live?
not lasers and space, but pressurepads
drag my forehead, oh how.
i reach out to the past, but it's just laughable
oh my, we are the survivors. but how
i stretch for coolness on my pillow, warm it with my brow.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5942
Posted: September 14, 2005 4:33 PM PDT; Last modified: September 14, 2005 7:26 PM PDT
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