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ALChemy on Seekers by Dovina 16 Sep 2005, 7:18 AM
Ironically nature is usually the inspiration for building designs. Besides if man is part of nature shouldn't manmade objects be. Aren't beaver damns part of nature. I think mankind tries to make itself more special than it is.
ALChemy replying on My addict by Heather Dee 16 Sep 2005, 6:44 AM
I live just outside Charlotte. Ya some of dem folk don't speak too clirr.
zodiac replying on Seekers by Dovina 16 Sep 2005, 5:39 AM
What the hell? Are you pulling my leg?
zodiac replying on Rejuvenation by Dovina 16 Sep 2005, 4:30 AM
Like I said, to attract insects and birds for pollination. In that sense, they're as much a part of seed-production as beards or buttocks, especially the baboon sort. Yes, eyes were a bad example, but you wouldn't say beards have a lot of other functions, would you?
tianyi replying on oh how far are we from wilderness by tianyi 16 Sep 2005, 4:18 AM
Cannery Row? *Googles* "Novel by John Steinbeck, published in 1945. Like most of Steinbeck's postwar work, Cannery Row is sentimental in tone while retaining the author's characteristic social criticism. Peopled by stereotypical good-natured bums and warm-hearted prostitutes living on the fringes of Monterey, Calif., the picaresque novel celebrates lowlifes who are poor but happy." I've never heard of it, but I'll take the extra points!
Dovina replying on Rejuvenation by Dovina 16 Sep 2005, 3:48 AM
But eyes have many other functions. What other functions do flowers have?
Dovina replying on Seekers by Dovina 16 Sep 2005, 3:46 AM
No, I only meant that the church is flat and erect.
zodiac on oh how far are we from wilderness by tianyi 16 Sep 2005, 2:35 AM
Great. And you've been reading Cannery Row, too. Extra points.
zodiac on Creation by Quarton 16 Sep 2005, 2:33 AM
You again. Do you consider the Big Bang and creation of Earth to be part of the process of evolution, or did the poem just kind of spaz out at that point?
zodiac replying on My addict by Heather Dee 16 Sep 2005, 2:22 AM
I'm from Cold Mountain, NC. It sounds either like the word 'mere' or the word 'fir'. That is, 'round hirr.
zodiac on Seekers by Dovina 16 Sep 2005, 2:19 AM
Is the church both siding and stucco? How hideous. I suppose you'll say, religion usually is.
zodiac replying on Rejuvenation by Dovina 16 Sep 2005, 2:19 AM
Why not? Eyes attract males for purposes of fertilization. Flowers attract bees for purposes of fertilization. If you don't believe me, ask yourself, what part of the flower actually produces seeds? Is that really even part of the flower? What's all the rest for? Wisdom teeth are relics from times when people ate grass. Here in Jordan, where people actually do eat grass, most people retain their wisdom teeth and lose the rest. True story. Extra grass-chewing ability allows grass-eating humans to survive to fertility and reproduce. But that's nothing like the eye argument. PS: Note the spelling on argument. You've gone on too long with your vestigial 'e's, frankly.
tianyi replying on oh how far are we from wilderness by tianyi 15 Sep 2005, 4:51 PM
Wow, thankyou very much!
tianyi on Emotionally Unavailable by horus8 15 Sep 2005, 4:47 PM
yes
srh on oh how far are we from wilderness by tianyi 15 Sep 2005, 2:58 PM
This is great. Really draw out a lovely slow rhythm in the second part. Nice, subtle, beautiful.
Caducus on Leaving Song by wilco 15 Sep 2005, 9:30 AM
I know line 3 its so true.
Caducus on Creation by Quarton 15 Sep 2005, 9:29 AM
Pretty good and technically sound it just seems a bit anonymous. Try and do one without the emphasis on rhyme it may be more punchy.
Caducus on Dale by INTRANSIT 15 Sep 2005, 9:00 AM
its a freakin classic and normally what i liked a couple of years ago isnt the same now (which can be said of some readers to my work). This is still so haunting and ripping out the guts of a grandfather clock shows your emotive qualities spilling over - this poem made me like you as a human and writer.
Caducus on Seekers by Dovina 15 Sep 2005, 8:57 AM
you dont need asymettrically its too effucsive with it but i like the comparisons of natures shape to our own.
ay deee replying on this has happened more than a few times by ay deee 14 Sep 2005, 8:00 PM
and how is it insane, even if it is wrong?