Re: a comment on The regrets made me voids by Prince of Void	zodiac 212.118.19.243	30-Sep-05/5:23 AM
I thought so too, but then I saw this: www.wholefoodsmarket.com/products/specialty/cheese-selector/index.html Select Blue-veined Cheeses. Scroll down.
Re: a comment on Sunrise On The Slag Heap by Caducus	Caducus 172.212.205.120	30-Sep-05/1:16 AM
We should twin cities.
Re: will you? by Sapphire	cyan9 217.40.63.105	30-Sep-05/1:05 AM
nice poem, bit too much rhyming for my (personal) linking, but it was to the point and quickly got a very nice image across to me.
Re: The regrets made me voids by Prince of Void	wilco 66.61.101.130	29-Sep-05/10:01 PM
this just doesnt make much sense....
Re: a comment on Yield by wilco	wilco 66.61.101.130	29-Sep-05/9:50 PM
wow thanks.
Re: a comment on Sunrise On The Slag Heap by Caducus	wilco 66.61.101.130	29-Sep-05/9:48 PM
Be thankful for where you are...Here in Memphis, poetry is pretty much just something like I killed a nigga and then raped his bitch and then I robbed some shit and then I killed a cop and did some more illegal shit. pretty good stuff..
Re: Yield by wilco	MacFrantic 207.200.116.65	29-Sep-05/9:47 PM
Absolutely stunning poetry! Picked up steam and ended perfectly. No need to be sung. *10* *10* *10*
Re: A Meadow, Among Other Things by Enkidu	wilco 66.61.101.130	29-Sep-05/9:45 PM
I can't say I entirely get whats going on here, but it has me intrigued enough to read it when I'm dully awake.
Re: pep talk by ay deee	wilco 66.61.101.130	29-Sep-05/9:43 PM
I'd lose everything after rich red thread and maybe everything after hairy shirt.
Re: A Barefoot Day in the Park by Dovina	wilco 66.61.101.130	29-Sep-05/9:40 PM
too much wisdom for his age...mmmhhmmmm....it's like they're just popping out knowing everything these days. I like the first half of both stanzas but i think the end could use a little tweak.
Re: The Man with the Fiberglass Head by MacFrantic	tadpole 68.64.172.229	29-Sep-05/8:03 PM
I like it
Re: a comment on nicholson by ay deee	ay deee 24.255.87.123	29-Sep-05/8:03 PM
oh, sweet
Re: Johnny by MacFrantic	tadpole 68.64.172.229	29-Sep-05/7:40 PM
I would like to hear it read
Re: a comment on "46 million babies a year" by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.151.147.145	29-Sep-05/3:22 PM
"Jesus saith unto him, Thomas, because thou hast chopped off thine foreskin, thou hast believed: blessed are they that have not chopped of their foreskins, and yet have believed." John 20:29 Noah is so loved because he is by far the most Excellent character in the Bible: "And Noah began to be an husbandman, and he planted a vineyard: And he drank of the wine, and was drunken; and he was uncovered within his tent. And Ham, the father of Canaan, saw the nakedness of his father, and told his two brethren without. And Shem and Japheth took a garment, and laid it upon both their shoulders, and went backward, and covered the nakedness of their father; and their faces were backward, and they saw not their father's nakedness. And Noah awoke from his wine, and knew what his younger son had done unto him. And he said, Cursed be Canaan; a servant of servants shall he be unto his brethren." Genesis 9:20-25 Moral of the story? If you see your drunken father passed out naked on his tent, then you should be enslaved. What wisdom.
Re: Through Your Eyes... by jlynnwall	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	29-Sep-05/9:13 AM
Looks like a bar code.
Re: "46 million babies a year" by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Stephen Robins 84.13.28.220	29-Sep-05/9:12 AM
Then holy trinity can thus be explained, As a squeeze, a wipe and flush, And like Jesu on the cross we are pained, To break it in half with a brush. Can I ask a question, why are Chriatians so selective in their reading of the 0ld Testament? Why do they like Noah but ignore chopping off their foreskins? Is 'cos Jesus taught us that that was all outdated tosh?
Re: A Barefoot Day in the Park by Dovina	Caducus 172.212.205.120	29-Sep-05/9:05 AM
You always grab my attention 2nd stanza opening 4 is very good. The ending seems laclustre but then i am over dramatic.
Re: pep talk by ay deee	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	29-Sep-05/9:05 AM
Good one you god damn mercenary.
Re: a comment on The regrets made me voids by Prince of Void	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	29-Sep-05/8:53 AM
(psst) Roquefort.
Re: The regrets made me voids by Prince of Void	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	29-Sep-05/8:51 AM
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