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The regrets made me voids (Other) by Prince of Void
The regrets made me voids Attempting to fill the voids Getting me old But still trying to fill the voids That’s getting me cold Yet dying to fill the voids It’s getting me buried in However void is void Even histories couldn’t fill the voids And I’ve gone numb As the void of meaning take the place of mine And the others have tried so The silence of void filled us over again In hundred miles green and blue yards

Up the ladder: in love
Down the ladder: The Stinging

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.25
Weighted score: 4.7913947
Overall Rank: 11256
Posted: September 28, 2005 10:03 PM PDT; Last modified: September 28, 2005 10:03 PM PDT
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[10] zodiac @ 194.165.132.226 | 29-Sep-05/5:54 AM | Reply
THE ROGUEFORT MADE ME VOID (Void) by I Like to Void

The Roguefort made me void
While saying (as I like to say) "void"
And getting cold
Cuts for a party at my friend Lloyd's.

As I say, I was getting cold
Cuts when this guy who resembled Freud
Came up with a cheese sampler tin -
I'm only human, though usually I try to avoid

Supermarket samples, owing to the hemorrhoids
I sustained as a result of steroid
Overuse while a roadie for the band Pink Floyd,
Though I'm currently unemployed.

But the hemorrhoids, as I say, are deployed
concentrically around the anal void
Roger Waters still occasionally comes
to plumb
As I mumble "void", and again "void",
As the others have tried so
The silence of void filled us over again
In hundred miles green and blue yards.
[0] ALChemy @ 65.188.89.69 > zodiac | 29-Sep-05/8:53 AM | Reply
(psst) Roquefort.
[10] zodiac @ 212.118.19.243 > ALChemy | 30-Sep-05/5:23 AM | Reply
I thought so too, but then I saw this:

www.wholefoodsmarket.com/products/specialty/cheese-selector/index.html

Select Blue-veined Cheeses. Scroll down.
[10] zodiac @ 212.118.19.243 > zodiac | 30-Sep-05/5:26 AM | Reply
ADDENDUM: It turns out that if you actually select "Roguefort" it directs you to a page about ordinary Roquefort. I'd had an image of an especially roguish blue-veined cheese not unlike a cheese version of ultragay British actor Ian McKellen which has, thankfully, been punctured. Not unlike ultragay British actor Ian McKellen.
[0] ALChemy @ 65.188.89.69 > zodiac | 30-Sep-05/6:31 AM | Reply
Gandolf's ultragay?!

Those poor little Hobbits.
[0] ALChemy @ 65.188.89.69 | 29-Sep-05/8:51 AM | Reply
Void=Nothing
Nothing=-0-
-0-=My vote
[3] wilco @ 66.61.101.130 | 29-Sep-05/10:01 PM | Reply
this just doesnt make much sense....
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