poemranker ::Through Your Eyes... by jlynnwall

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Free verse № 131445

Through Your Eyes...

Member since 2005 · Posted 29 Sep 2005 · 2 comments

Through Your Eyes... Please, don't ever stop looking at me that way... Please, don't ever stop looking into me that way... Please, don't ever stop caring enough to look... Please, don't ever start looking through me... Please, don't ever stop trying to look... Please, don't ever stop really looking... Please, don't ever stop looking at me that way... Please, don't ever stop seeing me in this way... Please, don't ever stop seeing me wholly... Please, don't ever stop thinking enough to see me... Please, don't ever start turning a blind eye to me... Please, don't ever stop trying to see me... Please, don't ever stop truly seeing... Please, don't ever stop seeing me in this way...

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2 comments

[n/a] ALChemy 29-Sep-05/9:13 AM Reply
Looks like a bar code.
[4] wilco 2-Oct-05/8:25 PM Reply
waaaay too much repetition.