Re: The Sleep Fantastic by nentwined	Kamikaze 75.7.228.195	21-Jul-08/9:19 AM
mmmmm...Zombies! This sounds like me before coffee.
Re: a comment on Purple Reign of Blood by Kamikaze	Kamikaze 75.7.228.195	21-Jul-08/9:05 AM
If I force some rhymes, it is for the comedic effect to mimic the sing-song cadence of a nursery rhyme. I experimented with this vein and a more free verse approach. It had a very different effect.
Re: in this bus terminal of the future by nentwined	Ranger 81.158.152.41	21-Jul-08/3:27 AM
lol
Re: a comment on We can all be free with our legs by daggatolar	Ranger 81.158.152.41	21-Jul-08/3:26 AM
Are you really a hobo?
Re: U.S. Lite by PodPoet	Ranger 81.158.152.41	21-Jul-08/3:24 AM
How curious.
Re: About the Broken Glass... by nypoet22	Ranger 81.158.152.41	21-Jul-08/3:22 AM
Great. "Is it sticks or bats, or hearts that beat" is a fabulous line. Did you mean to abandon the rhyme scheme with "cracks"?
Re: Cinematic Indulgence by nentwined	Ranger 81.158.152.41	21-Jul-08/3:10 AM
How quickly can you recite this? I love the skipping beat. It gives the poem a sort of it-might-be-meaningful-but-who-cares feel, almost childish. Makes me think you're the sort of person who says "dah-ling" to everyone you meet.
Re: a comment on Purple Reign of Blood by Kamikaze	Ranger 81.158.152.41	21-Jul-08/3:06 AM
No.
Re: a comment on God the mother by Dental Panic	Dental Panic 87.209.75.3	20-Jul-08/1:41 PM
Thanks very much for the comment - it makes sense, I'll keep the ending.
Re: The Man Who Drooped by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Christof 62.121.23.56	16-Jul-08/2:15 AM
'brownful' - beautiful. This poem might have been written for me. Was it? Was it?
Re: Question by half.italian	dvincent 71.109.127.126	15-Jul-08/6:44 PM
half.italian, Einstein said that mass dictates (warps) the fabric of space, and warps in the fabric of space dictate the motion of massive objects. Very true... Good poem.
Re: a comment on Skull Soup v.2 by SupremeDreamer	Kamikaze 75.11.190.59	11-Jul-08/3:08 PM
Aren't we all self-obsessed? Most writers are. I agree "shit" seemed out of place, but still one of your best. (version 2.0)
Re: a comment on Death of a Drug Addict by SupremeDreamer	Kamikaze 75.11.190.59	11-Jul-08/2:59 PM
THIS from the author of "Limp Cock"?
Re: a comment on La Llamada del Cholo by Kamikaze	Kamikaze 71.154.208.128	10-Jul-08/8:35 PM
Thank you for the praise. One of my best, if you get the references. Also some of my best rhymes, forced or otherwise. (nods to Kaolin)
Re: a comment on Purple Reign of Blood by Kamikaze	Kamikaze 71.154.208.128	10-Jul-08/9:10 AM
Aren't most rhymes forced, especially in "nursery rhymes"?
Re: Question by half.italian	SupremeDreamer 68.123.141.188	9-Jul-08/11:15 PM
Life as lived is formed by actions whose roots derive directly from thought. Therefor reality is a state which is defined individually from the perspectives of various minds. We simply denote certain attributes to constitute an absolute factual "reality" because many folks share common delusions concerning specific attributes of "reality".
Re: Hardboiled Heart by T. Jonathron Remp	SupremeDreamer 68.123.141.188	9-Jul-08/11:11 PM
Anybody care for a split heard omelette? Six.
Re: Killer Gap by T. Jonathron Remp	SupremeDreamer 68.123.141.188	9-Jul-08/11:08 PM
Procreation meets capitalism. BEHOLD THE AMERICAN DREAM MY FELLOWS! Behold the price of gas and the penis based obsessions with guzzling hummers!!! Behold the value of the soul directly equated with the value of our dollar!! Behold our children bred to work, brought about by government approved alcoholic adventures!!! Minds befuddled during fetal formation, only to be further augmented by piss poor education. Amen. GOD BLESS AMERICA!! Seven.
Re: I Got Mine Designed by Skamper	SupremeDreamer 68.123.141.188	9-Jul-08/10:58 PM
Sexual yearning and defrosted penis frozen in mastubatory rigor mortis... But people hate to much. Really. Simplistic expression is cool.. but sometimes the reader is left wanting more. Blessed with a seven.
Re: A rock by nisim2	SupremeDreamer 68.123.141.188	9-Jul-08/10:55 PM
You know what a rock is? really? No, not your sad attempt at philosophising: A foundation for a great house. A solid weapon of vengeance. The character of my penis when Angelina Jolie visits me in my dreams. A means to pass time by skipping it across bodies of water. A primate tool to crack hard shells and thus add more protein to it's diet... ultimately leading to larger brain size and walking on two feet, meat consumption and ultimately.... Your shitty attempts at philosophizing. Zero.