Re: a comment on Rancor by Dovina	amanda_dcosta 82.178.135.138	26-Jul-08/8:14 AM
Where inthe world is rockmage , btw? I dont see him around.
Re: Cinematic Indulgence by nentwined	half.italian 76.172.228.248	25-Jul-08/8:00 PM
I like everything except from "plot" to "fans". It has a great beat.
Re: a comment on The Man Who Drooped by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Dovina 68.183.245.117	25-Jul-08/7:42 PM
Really, is it true? (blush)
Re: a comment on Rancor by Dovina	Dovina 68.183.245.117	25-Jul-08/7:41 PM
Oh, please do. However everyone has left, its like talking to rockmage.
Re: a comment on The Man Who Drooped by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Dovina 68.183.245.117	25-Jul-08/7:38 PM
Please try reading it again without the tarnishment of indulgent optimism, striving to find essences within it that might, with forthright effort, yield its pungent insights.
Re: The sea and sonograph by Caducus	dvincent 71.109.127.126	25-Jul-08/3:09 PM
Caducus, Very nice! Touching but not overly sentimental or "easy". I'm not sure about the various winds, but the imagery is interesting and "comfortable". The progression toward sadness comes through strongly, and so does the loneliness of dealing with Downs Syndrome. It has a clean, natural, "unpoetic" feel, which is a very good thing! Great job.
Re: Win, Win, Lose, Lose by Dovina	T. Jonathron Remp 75.50.57.163	25-Jul-08/12:07 PM
Lose, Lose, Lose, Fail
Re: Almost Alone by sliver	T. Jonathron Remp 75.50.57.163	25-Jul-08/12:04 PM
I stopped reading halfway through.
Re: The Man Who Drooped by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	amanda_dcosta 82.178.136.146	25-Jul-08/4:30 AM
A lovely read.
Re: Question by half.italian	amanda_dcosta 82.178.136.146	25-Jul-08/4:25 AM
Interesting.
Re: What you wana hang out later? by T. Jonathron Remp	amanda_dcosta 82.178.136.146	25-Jul-08/4:24 AM
Am left wondering what this 'what you' is about ...
Re: Rancor by Dovina	amanda_dcosta 82.178.136.146	25-Jul-08/4:19 AM
Hi D. i remember cheering for you on your 200th poem, and here I see you've done another 100. Way to go girl. But what is this I read 'Amanda Dcosta has gone to heaven'? LOL. I was highly amused with that statement. Ok... guess its time for Amanda Dcosta to step down from heaven and return to our PR World. You guys have been missing me for long..... Hello everyone... good to see you all. Cheers to PR. I'm back !!!
Re: What you wana hang out later? by T. Jonathron Remp	Tyler J. Mancini 71.85.145.48	25-Jul-08/12:20 AM
What you need to figure out the correct form of a sestina. fail.
Re: Ashes Of Me by Tyler J. Mancini	T. Jonathron Remp 75.50.57.163	25-Jul-08/12:11 AM
GOD YOU SUCK WHO THE FUCK DO YOU THINK YOU ARE I LIKED IT A LOT
Re: a comment on The Man Who Drooped by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 87.84.68.242	24-Jul-08/5:10 AM
Yes. You're the protagonist. And Dovina plays the object of your drooping desires. I, on the other hand, am but a humble prune.
Re: Magazine Promotion by nentwined	Dovina 68.183.245.143	23-Jul-08/4:27 PM
Where the heck is GUD anyway? I liked 20% of it and that's a lot. Be like Homer, I say, write for absolutely no reason at all and try to sell nothing.
Re: Almost Alone by sliver	Dovina 68.183.245.143	23-Jul-08/4:21 PM
Becoming more like willow than oak is very Dao and very cool. Verse 2 displays drunkenness; please proofread. Verse 5 is a thing I learned 20 years ago. But Verse 6 blows it. The final verse is a disappointment to a good poem. Goals should always be subject to change.
Re: a comment on Cinematic Indulgence by nentwined	Dovina 68.183.245.143	23-Jul-08/4:16 PM
Pardon my butting in, but it really ought to go somewhere beyond "failure" in the last verse. For starters dump the two semicolons and the quotes, also the colon. Cool if you're making movies now; if so, a bit more process please.
Re: a comment on Cinematic Indulgence by nentwined	nentwined 98.148.139.252	22-Jul-08/3:51 PM
Thanks :) Any thoughts on where else you would have liked to see it go, or questions you would have liked answered?
Re: Cinematic Indulgence by nentwined	Dental Panic 87.209.75.3	22-Jul-08/1:18 PM
Pretty good flow but ending too soon.