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About the Broken Glass... (Sonnet) by nypoet22
Shards beneath a canopy, cloth white
And hardened leather soles like boots, kick.
The trembling figures of loved ones heave, like brick
Into the storefront windows of the night.
Our extremes are measured in fragmented glass,
From eyes and hands grown fierce and tongues ground sharp.
Bottles hurtle into the nooks and cracks,
And crash into the corners of the dark.
She wears her German boots and bridal gown,
And when the goblet breaks beneath her feet
Is it sticks or bats, or hearts that beat
Refracted in the crystal on the ground
Shattered on the floor to rise again
Are lovers in the eyes of gods and men.
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.0
Weighted score: 5.1422777
Overall Rank: 5452
Posted: May 26, 2008 9:28 PM PDT; Last modified: May 26, 2008 9:28 PM PDT
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