Re: a comment on To Talitha by amanda_dcosta	amanda_dcosta 202.164.136.176	20-Jul-06/10:08 AM
It is when we think we are healthy , wealthy and so called 'wise' that we fail to realize the value of life... every second... that we take life for granted. This little struggles... not knowing what a normal life is like, and yet how often do we thank our creator for his mercy and love in our lives.
Re: Mind Over Madness by drnick	Dovina 12.72.43.6	20-Jul-06/10:05 AM
It's great to sit around with a friend an get crazy, talk ceazy and laugh over a beer or a glass iof wine. I guess, having never done more, it seems unnecessary, but who am I to know. Not a bad description, I'd say.
Re: To Talitha by amanda_dcosta	Dovina 12.72.43.6	20-Jul-06/9:58 AM
This starts off well, but I think the Ben Franklin quote falls short, especially with the irrelevant word, "wealthy." "Healthy" and "wise" are applicable though. Also "wonders" should be "wonder" I think, to match the subject "I." But the thing that causes me to want to argue is the implicatioin that a healthy and wise person is perhaps more held in His hands than the other.
Re: a comment on Contractual Paradox of the Old by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.43.6	20-Jul-06/9:49 AM
Thanks, Mandy. Kids don't think about the standards their parents lived by and how it is for them now they're old. Instead of compassion, they poke insult, and it's bunk.
Re: Contractual Paradox of the Old by Dovina	amanda_dcosta 202.164.136.176	20-Jul-06/8:17 AM
Beautiful... it's like you tell a story, oh well, what am I talking... you are telling a story ... of expectations and of hoping. Give it time... and the story will unfold further... though it's hard work.
Re: Mind Over Madness by drnick	amanda_dcosta 202.164.136.176	20-Jul-06/8:02 AM
I see that you sum it up in your last lines. What I can't understand is why you guys take drugs. That aside,it gives me something new to think about.
Re: a comment on Get Over It by drnick	drnick 24.176.22.254	20-Jul-06/8:00 AM
Interesting that you assume I'm speaking of a girl. While it may seem that way, with the way "emo" kids look, I think it could be interpreted either way. I was assuming the role of the emo person who has the hair you speak of. Perhaps if I disconnected the last two lines it would be more apparent?
Re: Mind Over Madness by drnick	drnick 24.176.22.254	20-Jul-06/7:51 AM
This is about drugs, and being on them.
Re: a comment on Tribute by creepshow	creepshow 71.34.12.202	20-Jul-06/7:41 AM
Yes, it is a tribute to all that is vile, dead within itself touching to destroy all. Tribute is an homage to all the horror.
Re: Tribute by creepshow	creepshow 71.34.12.202	20-Jul-06/7:40 AM
Yes, hence the title, it is a tribute to the macabre and horror.
Re: a comment on I'm Learning To Drive by amanda_dcosta	amanda_dcosta 202.164.136.176	20-Jul-06/3:57 AM
And P.s. we didn't swap brains. I have mine and it's beautifully intact.
Re: a comment on I'm Learning To Drive by amanda_dcosta	amanda_dcosta 202.164.136.176	20-Jul-06/3:46 AM
Cool. You're reply is as expected. But this ain't abouy your heart or lungs. It's about whether you have your brains and if so, where it is. ;-)
Re: I think I'm forgetting it now. by FreeFormFixation	Zoe 89.240.138.79	20-Jul-06/2:00 AM
This is really great. Some of the lines need to be pulled back to make them as tense as the others: 'And just as my last shred of consciousness slips'. But I enjoy the tone and rhythm of it.
Re: a comment on no big box to live in by A. Nomaly	A. Nomaly 67.136.169.66	19-Jul-06/8:30 PM
thanks, I like you too
Re: no big box to live in by A. Nomaly	Dovina 12.72.43.136	19-Jul-06/2:42 PM
Even with helter-skelter grammar, inordinate juxtoposition of voices, and line breaks that a novice could complain about, I followed it and liked it.
Re: a comment on I'm Learning To Drive by amanda_dcosta	ALChemy 71.241.66.181	19-Jul-06/10:20 AM
Yeah but my hearts in the right place ;-)
Re: An Interview With King David by amanda_dcosta	ALChemy 71.241.66.181	19-Jul-06/10:14 AM
I can't get chat to work for me, sorry.
Re: a comment on A Better God by Dovina	Dovina 70.38.78.229	18-Jul-06/8:03 PM
Actually, the Christian God is better in the same way my mother was when I told her, at age ten, that she had conducted a game unfairly at my birthday party.
Re: A Better God by Dovina	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.68.233	18-Jul-06/10:24 AM
You'd make a better god than that Christian idiot some people like.
Re: An Interview With King David by amanda_dcosta	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.68.233	18-Jul-06/10:23 AM
Another hilarious gem! What drugs are you on? 10/10 for humour. Not.