poemranker ::no big box to live in by A. Nomaly

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Free verse № 144673

no big box to live in

Member since 2002 · Posted 19 Jul 2006 · Edited 19 Jul 2006 · 2 comments

last nite had an encounter with the park ranger. he asked me for my driver's license, yes sir, that dog needs to be on a leash at all times. oh? I didn't know, is that camper shell yours, yes sir, be sure to take it with you. Do you still live in Venice, No, I live here, Here? Here. How long have you been down here? About a week and a half, four days, 2 years, off and on. I'll give you a warning

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[9] Dovina 19-Jul-06/2:42 PM Reply
Even with helter-skelter grammar, inordinate juxtoposition of voices, and line breaks that a novice could complain about, I followed it and liked it.
[n/a] A. Nomaly › Dovina 19-Jul-06/8:30 PM Reply
thanks, I like you too