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Sunshine (Free verse) by ingwa
On the Isle the lack of sun
Depressing grayness, damp
Cold and wet, miserable
Into the heat, artificial, dry
Give me sunshine, gloriously warm
Heat me, feed me, with the energy you give
Turn my skin to a healthy color
Bleach my hair, to the golden hue
The sun is mighty, dangerous too
Ensure you put sun screen on
Skin blemishes form, the skin blisters
Rehydration, water, salt, oil necessities
Keeps the plants alive
Through process of chemical change
Creates glorious greenery all around
Feeds animals, insects, life forever
Without it gravity would not exist
Keeping a perfect balance
Without it life would cease
With it, life abounds for ever.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.976287
Overall Rank: 8224
Posted: May 3, 2005 2:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 17, 2005 1:28 PM PDT
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