Re: a comment on Dance Of Insanity by forsaken	forsaken 65.175.198.197	6-May-12/2:15 PM
Who're a moron this poem is about growing up, about killing the boy inside you
Re: a comment on Late Song by nypoet22	nypoet22 75.74.75.115	28-Mar-12/10:08 PM
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Re: a comment on Late Song by nypoet22	nypoet22 75.74.75.115	28-Mar-12/10:07 PM
your constructive criticism was considered in the re-write. here's the result, performed with guitar and violin: http://youtu.be/pw_9K3VZZoo
Re: a comment on Late Song by nypoet22	nypoet22 75.74.75.115	28-Mar-12/10:05 PM
here's what it sounds like: http://youtu.be/pw_9K3VZZoo
Re: prosepiece by skaskowski	nypoet22 75.74.75.115	28-Mar-12/7:57 PM
i'm assuming this is at least partly autobiographical. it's thought-provoking and sounds genuine, the pro and con of the post-breakup drunk text. the last time i felt like doing that texting was in its infancy and she didn't have a cell phone. when you're in the mood, i'd suggest paring down the adjectives so it hits harder and faster.
Re: it is my turn this season by daniella	nypoet22 75.74.75.115	26-Mar-12/11:53 PM
i don't think i saw this poem's earlier versions. i like what you did with the imagery, though, much tighter than the lines SD commented on. i'm not sure i understand what you did with the seasons. it looks like the stanzas are fall-summer-spring, is the backward progression of the seasons intentional?
Re: a comment on A dream world by alvinb	alvinb 121.97.68.61	29-Jan-12/9:45 PM
I was talking to daphne too..
Re: Grab Out For J. Christ! by Sing4Jesus!	wDaphnew 212.139.224.56	8-Jan-12/8:25 AM
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Re: The Christian Soldier by Sing4Jesus!	wDaphnew 212.139.224.56	8-Jan-12/8:25 AM
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Re: A prayer about Jesus by Sing4Jesus!	wDaphnew 212.139.224.56	8-Jan-12/8:23 AM
fabulous shit.
Re: Let's Grovel For Jesus And Fight The Naughty Satan! by Sing4Jesus!	wDaphnew 212.139.224.56	8-Jan-12/8:22 AM
great stuff
Re: Twilight Affair by thepinkbunnyofdoom	wDaphnew 212.139.224.56	8-Jan-12/8:20 AM
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Re: a comment on Rimming by wDaphnew	wDaphnew 212.139.235.15	5-Jan-12/10:09 AM
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Re: FHjk by Dark Angle	wDaphnew 85.210.6.129	31-Dec-11/8:59 AM
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Re: Grab Out For J. Christ! by Sing4Jesus!	wDaphnew 85.210.6.129	31-Dec-11/8:58 AM
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Re: Munnar -a must -see destination by Jessina	wDaphnew 85.210.6.129	31-Dec-11/8:54 AM
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Re: You're passionate by EAger to Offend	wDaphnew 85.210.6.129	31-Dec-11/8:53 AM
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