Re: what is poetry 101 by Skamper	Skamper 58.165.127.10	24-Mar-13/4:32 AM
ah...now we get to the gist of the review...the form is mute. Your need to vent your childish/spitefulness is forefront. No matter how much you SHOUT doesn't make you right. An opinion is valid only with genuine thought.
Re: wall flower by Freethinker1602	nentwined 98.248.146.104	11-Mar-13/1:41 AM
Cute, in that it dances around the subject...but it does so so repetitiously! So repetitiously. As if it were repeating itself, verse after verse, saying the same thing. This needs to say something else, too, or instead. Try some specifics. Make us care about this character, in particular (or make the dance itself more interesting, but even then, it should be more personal).
Re: Pandora's Box by Edna Sweetlove	nentwined 98.248.146.104	10-Mar-13/10:10 PM
nice finish, but the strokes up there were a bit unschooled—and if that was the point it's too meta for me. ;)
Re: a comment on Kill Criminals In The Name Of JESUS! by Sing4Jesus!	nentwined 98.248.146.104	10-Mar-13/10:02 PM
Am I spoiled by facebook? I want to "like" this comment. *shudder*
Re: a comment on Kill Criminals In The Name Of JESUS! by Sing4Jesus!	nentwined 98.248.146.104	10-Mar-13/9:58 PM
I'd call it satire of some middling order. On its own merits, it's middling; satire elevates it a touch, but only a touch...and rated within satire's bounds, it's still just middling at best. Not to say I didn't enjoy bits of it, presuming satire. But still....
Re: Shuushin the multi-personality total cunt by mr cunt	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.14.5	22-Feb-13/9:54 AM
What a loaqd of cunts you all are.
Re: Grab Out For J. Christ! by Sing4Jesus!	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.14.5	22-Feb-13/9:52 AM
Fucking drivel.
Re: The Ballad of Fraser Allonby Q.C., Barrister-At-Law by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.14.5	22-Feb-13/9:51 AM
excellent.
Re: Almost One by thepinkbunnyofdoom	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.14.5	22-Feb-13/9:50 AM
Boring would be a compliment to this.
Re: Idiot Box by thepinkbunnyofdoom	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.14.5	22-Feb-13/9:50 AM
Doggerel has its moments. But not many.
Re: Black Rose by arduinn	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.14.5	22-Feb-13/9:49 AM
Fucking awful.
Re: The Winturd Tale of Sir Donald Nudesby by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.14.5	22-Feb-13/9:47 AM
Delightful
Re: a comment on A mag that PAYS??? by SupremeDreamer	SupremeDreamer 146.74.94.65	18-Feb-13/2:07 PM
People interfere with the joy of drinking alone. Especially women.
Re: a comment on what is poetry 101 by Skamper	SupremeDreamer 146.74.94.65	18-Feb-13/2:01 PM
Ignorant eh? Quibbling over a minor detail eh? The essential point is this: IT IS STILL SHIT! :)
Re: A mag that PAYS??? by SupremeDreamer	Skamper 124.176.101.176	17-Feb-13/2:03 AM
this is why Bukowski hated people
Re: a comment on what is poetry 101 by Skamper	Skamper 124.176.101.176	17-Feb-13/12:29 AM
this is some sort of shitty attempt at senryu...labelling it free verse was my choice. Your ignorant review speakes only of your own stupidity
Re: Wind By Any Other Name by Edna Sweetlove	SupremeDreamer 146.74.94.65	11-Feb-13/4:03 PM
Moi? Tu parle francais com un CON!!! Com un SALOPE!!! FUT TON MERE!
Re: Wind By Any Other Name by Edna Sweetlove	SupremeDreamer 146.74.94.65	11-Feb-13/4:00 PM
Edna SweetAss would be a better name!!
Re: Wind By Any Other Name by Edna Sweetlove	SupremeDreamer 146.74.94.65	11-Feb-13/4:00 PM
Wind might refer to the flatulence which escapes your mouth everytime you decide to open it. Yes... I think that is EXACTLY what you mean!! TEN!
Re: a comment on Belle Melange/The Curse of Millhaven by lmp	SupremeDreamer 146.74.94.65	11-Feb-13/3:57 PM
Err.. don't feel bad man, click the "Glosa" link. Apparently it's a poem formed from someone elses' work. Specifically the first four lines (quatrian) were written by Nick Cave. The rest is Imp.