| Re: Help! by Dovina |
Dovina 68.183.53.134 |
27-Nov-13/5:42 PM |
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Poemranker is dead, right? Guess I will stop checking here.
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| Re: Dashes of Deers can Hears by T. Jonathron Remp |
Edna Sweetlove 212.139.236.18 |
14-Aug-13/12:39 PM |
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| Re: ~Methinks~ by wDaphnew |
Edna Sweetlove 212.139.236.18 |
14-Aug-13/12:38 PM |
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I think I know to whom this refers. It's the old queen I see rubbing himself up in the park.
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| Re: Rimming by wDaphnew |
Edna Sweetlove 212.139.236.18 |
14-Aug-13/12:37 PM |
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A gorgeous poem which leaves a certain taste in the mouth.
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| Re: The Last Time by EAger to Offend |
Edna Sweetlove 212.139.236.18 |
14-Aug-13/12:35 PM |
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Jolly good stuff, old chap.
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| Re: A mag that PAYS??? by SupremeDreamer |
amanda_dcosta 82.178.231.86 |
13-May-13/10:09 AM |
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Heyyy!!! Since you're talking about writing and getting published, how about writing poetry for cash? Visit my site for more details towards May 25, 2013. I'm organizing a Tanka competition and there's cash to be won. It's open to all ... www.mandys-pages.com. Contest should start May 25 or June 1. Until then, it's just notices passing around. Stay tuned.
http://www.mandys-pages.com
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| Re: Love Redefined by Mus Vai |
penandpaper 220.255.2.123 |
10-May-13/12:00 PM |
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What a storyteller you are. This, with its connecting poem ‘Love Slain’, attracts me to the story.
Maybe because of fluidity. Maybe because of the immortalization of emotions so raw.
Written so long ago, but it will always sound like yesterday.
I wish you could tell me what comes after, or in between, or even before.
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| Re: A hangman's moaning by Moauram |
Stephen Robins 164.143.244.34 |
7-May-13/9:32 AM |
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| Re: a comment on A hangman's moaning by Moauram |
SupremeDreamer 146.74.94.65 |
4-Apr-13/4:07 PM |
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OI! Looks like someone's a wee bit upset! :D
You should have been about here long enough to have gotten used to my crudeness. Dovi, baby, quit bitching and toughen up already!
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| Re: a comment on A hangman's moaning by Moauram |
Dovina 173.224.9.25 |
30-Mar-13/2:58 PM |
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shit comment!! why do you even come in off the street? no wonder this site has failed with idiots like you!
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| Re: a comment on Cannikin by Caducus |
SupremeDreamer 146.74.94.65 |
27-Mar-13/8:37 PM |
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Horrid. Dov. HORRID. Just for showing up? *sigh* what have we come to? Not that the poem has no merit-- I think it is horrid that YOU THINK THAT WAY.
;(
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| Re: Cannikin by Caducus |
SupremeDreamer 146.74.94.65 |
27-Mar-13/8:36 PM |
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| Re: A hangman's moaning by Moauram |
SupremeDreamer 146.74.94.65 |
27-Mar-13/8:26 PM |
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Oh, or the crazy mofo that kills you and opens your skull!
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| Re: A hangman's moaning by Moauram |
SupremeDreamer 146.74.94.65 |
27-Mar-13/8:25 PM |
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It is the TOOL that suffers, fool. Not he who utilizes it. Ever seen the pen/pencil run out? Yeah, that's you.
And no, no one can see your mind except the asshole at the morgue. Till then "one must speak his/her mind."
You speak it like crap. The final stare of darkness would make a mind brittle... yet you're still alive.
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| Re: wall flower by Freethinker1602 |
SupremeDreamer 146.74.94.65 |
27-Mar-13/8:18 PM |
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Ahh... this is ripe for greatness. The theme resonates, yet you didn't exectute it in the best manner.
Speak of the dances that come BEFORE your yearning for the last. Speak of that which inspired you to bother dancing in the first place... And PLEASE let it not be teenaged weariness for fuck sakes. ;/ List them as they come and have them evolve to an acceptance of death. We all grow weary, and all of us shall dance the last dance with sweet lady death, but the life that leads to that is what defines ones' contentedness
with death and the last dance.
Bring in the details! IMAGINE!
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| Re: what is poetry 101 by Skamper |
SupremeDreamer 146.74.94.65 |
27-Mar-13/8:08 PM |
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You know why you're so mad? Because I didn't declare it the greatest piece I've ever read... What is poetry? You thought to express that in a senryu/haiku? Mr. Haiku would punch you in the face. Honestly, he would. In my hey-day? I'd have awarded you with a fucking zero. Don't get all defensive and BUTT-HURT!!!
Oh shit, did the yelling upset you? ... Fucking asshat. Be thankful this isn't face to face... I'd let you know what yelling sounds like. :D
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| Re: a comment on what is poetry 101 by Skamper |
SupremeDreamer 146.74.94.65 |
27-Mar-13/8:01 PM |
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BTW.. Just take notice that no one else bothered to respond to this crap... I'm the only one who genuinely thought to give a fuck, vote, and voice my UNIQUE opinion. Everyone responded with?... Silence. Biatch! How do you like that one? Eh? Also, text doesn't shout, even in capitals, unless your brain processes it so. :X GEN-U-WHINE. Now skamper along, punk.
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| Re: a comment on what is poetry 101 by Skamper |
SupremeDreamer 146.74.94.65 |
27-Mar-13/7:55 PM |
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Genuine? So are you insinuating that someone other than I came up with this thought? ... O.K. retard. I must be a puppet then? Right...!!!!
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| Re: Pandora's Box by Edna Sweetlove |
SupremeDreamer 146.74.94.65 |
27-Mar-13/7:53 PM |
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Must have had a really good camera to do that... does the follow up poem of this include the spread of STDs?
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| Re: A mag that PAYS??? by SupremeDreamer |
Skamper 58.165.127.10 |
24-Mar-13/4:37 AM |
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lol....really LOL...not shouting...just highlighting mirth...
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