| Re: Glossary without an index by daniella |
Ranger ::1 |
3-Oct-14/3:28 PM |
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Some cool ideas. The whole thing feels quite bleak - or have I read it wrong?
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| Re: A mag that PAYS??? by SupremeDreamer |
Ranger ::1 |
3-Oct-14/3:19 PM |
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Only one way to find out, right?
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| Re: Sponds Hill, Cheshire, 26 December 2013 by Nicholas Jones |
Ranger 127.0.0.1 |
3-Oct-14/3:17 PM |
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I used to live near-ish to there.
Agree with nentwined - much of this is lovely. I particularly like the closing lines - very nice.
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| Re: February by half.italian |
daniella ::1 |
14-Sep-14/6:25 PM |
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this is just not written well
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| Re: Outliers by nypoet22 |
daniella 127.0.0.1 |
14-Sep-14/6:20 PM |
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some of the metaphors don't work, not even surreally...
there are some great phrases here, some imagery but then too much prothletysing...
zest of a grapefruit is never sweet, always bitter.
work it.
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| Re: server maintenance by nentwined |
daniella 127.0.0.1 |
14-Sep-14/6:02 PM |
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| Re: Lizzie Boredom by Bonehiss |
daniella ::1 |
14-Sep-14/6:00 PM |
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i hope you did not send this to her.
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| Re: a comment on it is my turn this season by daniella |
daniella 127.0.0.1 |
5-Sep-14/7:33 PM |
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get the to your place beneath the bridge, scamper down from whence you came.
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| Re: a comment on "She Phoned This Morning" by ARTIE |
ARTIE ::1 |
2-Sep-14/4:49 PM |
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Thanks and it was an irony; to love lost and a love to gain.
I waffled between "did herald my way" and "did herald my day" but I think the past/present tenses would've worked in either case.
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| Re: "She Phoned This Morning" by ARTIE |
daniella 127.0.0.1 |
2-Sep-14/4:07 PM |
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sense and sensibility permeates this piece, which indeed seems more like the intro to what is a beautiful ode to love lost
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| Re: Let's praise great Britannia's golden days of now and then by Edna Sweetlove |
daniella ::1 |
2-Sep-14/4:03 PM |
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you lost me at the onset.
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| Re: The Young Girl From Khartoum by Edna Sweetlove |
daniella ::1 |
2-Sep-14/4:01 PM |
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| Re: a comment on what is poetry 101 by Skamper |
ARTIE ::1 |
17-Aug-14/11:20 PM |
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Skamper - I am trying to imagine.....
Better yet, take a chill pill whilst I ponder first.
Stress kills. Breathe deeply...... use your imagination.
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| Re: Sponds Hill, Cheshire, 26 December 2013 by Nicholas Jones |
nentwined 50.174.121.227 |
26-Jun-14/8:10 AM |
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Thirteen years? Poemranker's been here...yes, for thirteen years. Wow.
I love a lot of this. Don't have enough mind left to say whether I love all of it or not.
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| Re: a comment on where once by daniella |
daniella 69.125.74.255 |
1-Jun-14/7:34 PM |
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thank you. i revisited this and thank you all for your comments
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| Re: a comment on Breaking Breath by daniella |
daniella 69.125.74.255 |
1-Jun-14/7:31 PM |
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thank you :)) i am myself kind of tangled in my head.. ee cummings was my poet father.
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| Re: Pandora's Box by Edna Sweetlove |
Skamper 124.187.100.88 |
20-Apr-14/1:07 AM |
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omg..10 just for your steadfast, persistence to this site..x
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| Re: what is poetry 101 by Skamper |
Skamper 124.187.100.88 |
20-Apr-14/12:29 AM |
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first of all...thankyou for your passion and extreme reaction...forgoing the obvious, that you really need sedation or at the very least intervention. I know I am a POET, and you are merely another wannabe nay-sayer who, will felicitate my rise to fame. Skamper
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| Re: The Last Time by EAger to Offend |
SupremeDreamer 50.197.186.38 |
12-Jan-14/4:45 PM |
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| Re: a comment on The Last Time by EAger to Offend |
SupremeDreamer 50.197.186.38 |
12-Jan-14/4:44 PM |
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