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The Young Girl From Khartoum (Free verse) by Edna Sweetlove
There was once a young girl from Khartoum Who came onto this earth with no womb When pregnant she got She birthed through her bot Which stunk out the delivery room

Up the ladder: Ivory, slaves and gold
Down the ladder: her treasure

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.8333335
Weighted score: 5.2241178
Overall Rank: 4312
Posted: June 23, 2007 4:20 PM PDT; Last modified: June 23, 2007 4:20 PM PDT
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[n/a] Edna Sweetlove @ 85.210.207.35 | 23-Jun-07/4:21 PM | Reply
This is a great poem! 10 out of 10!
[n/a] Edna Sweetlove @ 85.210.207.35 > Edna Sweetlove | 23-Jun-07/4:24 PM | Reply
I can't seem to be able to vote this 10/10! What's wrong? Everyone else votes their own rubbisbh 10/10! Why can't I? It's discrimination because my twat smells bad.
[n/a] Skamper @ 202.6.132.165 | 25-Jun-07/11:15 AM | Reply
what did she call it
[9] alvinb @ 122.52.99.32 | 4-Mar-08/10:16 PM | Reply
Do your twat really smells bad???
[0] daniella @ ::1 | 2-Sep-14/4:01 PM | Reply
what an odd duck
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