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Friendship thrown away (Free verse) by cutiewithceli
Standing alone with no one around,
The silence is scary, not a sound.
I wish someone would speak to me,
And say a simple word.
I've already said that I'm sorry,
Not accepting that is absurd.
It's been so long since I've felt this way,
Since the silence has washed over me.
I love the old person I was,
So loving, happy and carefree.
Why would someone make another human,
Feel the way I feel right now?
With simple words a mood can change.
But I find myself alone talking a 'loud.
I wish I could take back,
What I did or didn't do.
The things I should have said,
But I can't change history its true.
Such a young friendship,
Thrown away just like that.
I guess with nothing left to say,
I'll leave it alone and that is that.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.8333335
Weighted score: 5.2241178
Overall Rank: 4306
Posted: March 19, 2004 8:21 PM PST; Last modified: March 19, 2004 8:21 PM PST
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