| Re: Prologue by Dovina |
Ranger 62.252.32.15 |
21-Oct-06/5:23 PM |
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Excellent, D. I think this could be read as a monologue (referencing back to the title) wherein the poet is arguing with him/herself, or it could be an exchange between two.
Do you know, if half the people on All Poetry took this view, the amount of poems online would be reduced by a massive percentage?
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| Re: Prologue by Dovina |
PodPoet 68.107.89.26 |
21-Oct-06/10:57 AM |
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Haha this is humorous and thoughtful. A poet's poem. Nice work.
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| Re: weather poem part 1: the wolf journal by nypoet22 |
pete 62.56.86.85 |
21-Oct-06/7:02 AM |
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well; got blown away by this; took it slow and let it speak to me , then saw all this sour-face bitchin and wondered what that was all about. in some of us poetry is a continuum and it being broken up in chunks merely a convention ( sez he pompously)... anyhow, 8 for now and will return to it later
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| Re: Work by half.italian |
pete 62.56.86.85 |
21-Oct-06/6:48 AM |
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| Re: connect the dots by daniella |
pete 62.56.86.85 |
21-Oct-06/6:43 AM |
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I looked at the site and watched the whole film and would recommend any others to do the same; i think this counts as a bit more than a political statement; 10 for the lead 6 for the poem
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| Re: Slur by MacFrantic |
Dovina 70.38.78.229 |
20-Oct-06/3:42 PM |
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Nothingness and everything? Have at it.
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| Re: a comment on weather poem part 3: the hurricane (renga) by nypoet22 |
nypoet22 65.10.116.105 |
20-Oct-06/3:03 PM |
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great groundhog eyes
will waken hungering,
harvest gone to green
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| Re: a comment on weather poem part 3: the hurricane (renga) by nypoet22 |
Dovina 70.38.78.229 |
20-Oct-06/2:04 PM |
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That was 17
See their shadows and go back down
Punxsutawney's never been wrong
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| Re: A Beard Most Foul by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w |
Ranger 62.252.32.15 |
20-Oct-06/10:56 AM |
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| Re: a comment on MRS Degree by Miggy |
Ranger 62.252.32.15 |
20-Oct-06/10:45 AM |
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That has to be the best comment all week. If ever suicide booths hit the big time, I want 'headbutting kitchen utensils' to be among the selection. After all, I cannot imagine how difficult it must be to attach a decent-sized knife well enough at head height with ordinary household adhesives.
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| Re: Pope Benedict And The Limbo Problem by Edna Sweetlove |
drnick 24.176.22.254 |
20-Oct-06/10:13 AM |
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Amazing, I need to go rethink my life.
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| Re: MRS Degree by Miggy |
drnick 24.176.22.254 |
20-Oct-06/10:11 AM |
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This has to be country lyrics because the only way you could get away with this simplistic nonsense is if you were singing it to a bunch of inbred republicans. Do you honestly think you're improving? Do you even care? Do you actually spend the amount of time from one post to another for working on these lyrics? Let me break it down for you:
YOU ARE TERRIBLE, THESE ARE THE WORST "LYRICS" I HAVE SEEN/HEARD SINCE YOUR LAST POST. EITHER STOP WRITING OR HEADBUTT THE SHARP END OF A KNIFE.
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| Re: a comment on weather poem part 3: the hurricane (renga) by nypoet22 |
Ranger 62.252.32.15 |
20-Oct-06/3:55 AM |
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Clay warriors rise;
from a flooded tomb they march
to the bluebells' chime
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| Re: Wanking In The Bucket by Edna Sweetlove |
Engelbert Humpalot 80.225.209.163 |
19-Oct-06/5:55 PM |
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| Re: Grab Out For J. Christ! by Sing4Jesus! |
Engelbert Humpalot 80.225.209.163 |
19-Oct-06/5:54 PM |
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| Re: May Sinners Rot In Fucking Hell! by Sing4Jesus! |
Engelbert Humpalot 80.225.209.163 |
19-Oct-06/5:53 PM |
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Fabulous title and the words live up to it. This deserves to be the worst poem on this site for ever!
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| Re: Israel (Through The Eyes Of One Jewish Soul) by slana5 |
Engelbert Humpalot 80.225.209.163 |
19-Oct-06/5:51 PM |
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Staggeringly repulsive load of old garbage!
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| Re: Smalltalkers by D. $ Fontera |
D. $ Fontera 129.82.153.13 |
19-Oct-06/12:53 PM |
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| Re: Smalltalkers by D. $ Fontera |
Dovina 70.38.78.229 |
19-Oct-06/11:50 AM |
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Sounds like what my father called "beating artound the bush." Not very well organized.
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| Re: connect the dots by daniella |
Dovina 70.38.78.229 |
19-Oct-06/11:46 AM |
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Ok, I looked at the site, but didn't stay there long. If you have a political statment to make in a poem, it would be better to make it, I think, rather than just referung to a URL.
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