Re: a comment on MRS Degree by Miggy	drnick 24.176.22.254	23-Oct-06/2:55 PM
Exactly, nice hai-poo...it asks the question I've been afraid to ask myself thus far.
Re: Danger Zone by Miggy	drnick 24.176.22.254	23-Oct-06/2:51 PM
Inspiring with its complexity.
Re: a comment on Prologue by Dovina	Dovina 70.38.78.229	23-Oct-06/2:49 PM
I thought it was only slightly more clever than droning on about writer’s block.
Re: a comment on Prologue by Dovina	Dovina 70.38.78.229	23-Oct-06/2:49 PM
I read it at a poetry workshop, asking an old man to read the indented lines. Everyone thought it was rather funny. That’s a group of poets for you. I think the general public would think it’s just silly
Re: a comment on Tidal by helenwales	Dovina 70.38.78.229	23-Oct-06/2:40 PM
Probably right.
Re: a comment on The Day Habeas Corpus Died by Wakeboarder20	Wakeboarder20 71.227.248.140	23-Oct-06/9:16 AM
why?
Re: a comment on The Day Habeas Corpus Died by Wakeboarder20	Wakeboarder20 71.227.248.140	23-Oct-06/9:16 AM
thank you.
Re: The Day Habeas Corpus Died by Wakeboarder20	Ranger 62.252.32.15	23-Oct-06/8:37 AM
Neat idea
Re: Tennesee Waterfall by razorgrin	Ranger 62.252.32.15	23-Oct-06/8:33 AM
I've heard it called a Kentucky Falls before; you guys must have some weird water features.
Re: a comment on MRS Degree by Miggy	Ranger 62.252.32.15	23-Oct-06/8:28 AM
What Nick means isn't entirely that these are the worst lyrics of all time - I've seen worse - but that since the first post, 4 years ago, to this, the 99th post, there has been no shred of enthusiasm to actually improve upon mediocre poetry. That being said, this did at least inspire me to write a poeme of my very own: 'So She Won't Fuck You, Eh?' (hai-poo) by Ranger She's blonde She's thick She's had a lot of dick:- So what?
Re: MRS Degree by Miggy	Sing4Jesus! 85.210.219.182	23-Oct-06/2:59 AM
What is an MRS degree? I think we should be told.
Re: The Day Habeas Corpus Died by Wakeboarder20	Sing4Jesus! 85.210.219.182	23-Oct-06/2:58 AM
Unsubtle to say the least.
Re: Pope Benedict And The Limbo Problem by Edna Sweetlove	Sing4Jesus! 85.210.219.182	23-Oct-06/2:57 AM
The pope is an evil old man and is probably satan-spawn. So mocking him is good in my book!
Re: Israel (Through The Eyes Of One Jewish Soul) by slana5	Sing4Jesus! 85.210.219.182	23-Oct-06/2:54 AM
Very amusing. I assume you are a Zionist. Jesus was killed by you lot.
Re: Tidal by helenwales	nypoet22 65.10.116.105	22-Oct-06/9:18 PM
not strictly haiku, but an interesting series of images nonetheless. the majority of these verses are closer to senryu (5-7-5 syllabic verse about people) than haiku (5-7-5 syllabic verse about nature). if these all really constitute one overall poem however, i would try to make your theme clearer, because i'm not seeing connection between the montage of images.
Re: a comment on Tidal by helenwales	nypoet22 65.10.116.105	22-Oct-06/9:12 PM
i think it's mainly just you that running 5-7-5 doesn't jive with.
Re: Epilogue by MacFrantic	nypoet22 65.10.116.105	22-Oct-06/9:09 PM
interesting. i'm not sure this stands on its own, but the end of a series... sure, why not.
Re: a comment on MRS Degree by Miggy	nypoet22 65.10.116.105	22-Oct-06/9:04 PM
oh come on, it's not THAT bad... the idea is solid and a few of the images are good, it's just the wording and a few of the more inane images that require a kitchen utensil.
Re: Prologue by Dovina	nypoet22 65.10.116.105	22-Oct-06/8:53 PM
i'd be curious to hear this performed by actors. is it a prologue to something, or to all poetry in general?
Re: Canada by PodPoet	Ranger 62.252.32.15	21-Oct-06/5:40 PM
You're not from Canada, I see. Check out the Arrogant Worms' self-penned national anthem, 'Canada's Really Big'.