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Tidal (Free verse) by helenwales
I've got to get in
Stranded at the asylum
Monday brings a job
Hot sand burns my toes
Cigarette stuck to my lip
I like flying kites
The cusp of summer
Chill of the ocean's cold soul
Lost penguin swims alone
Bob went to the beach
He liked brown nubile bodies
Undies in my crack
Streamers dreamers fly
Dinosaurs in the distance
Sharing with my friend
A big fat tummy
A big fat bum blocks the sun
I don't like this one
Coopers on the beach
The original pale ale
Matches Heather's thongs
Family fermented
Collection depot when due
Drinks vols brews and pissed
Spongey, thick and new
Karki green and fashionable
Five bucks a bargain true
Gradually worsening
Bloody hell Adelle
Cheese on the table
I nurse my beer alone
I don't like olives!
Sprinkler hitting ground
Move it back to the right spot
Thirsty lawn exhales
Facemask burning tight
Red blotches cover my cheeks
Haiku fly in drink
J/H/H/H
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5773
Posted: October 14, 2006 10:53 PM PDT; Last modified: October 14, 2006 10:57 PM PDT
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