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Endless Battle (Free verse) by rahson_s
Unscripted, stripped, faster, disaster
awaits, hung over and strung out,
dependent on more than you will ever know,
below sea level she penetrates my
lies and picks out truth, the honest
truth is I lie too much, the damage
has been done, I'm losing this battle
with my pen, she knows me very well,
my ups and downs, do's and don'ts,
another chapter in my head wishing
to debut to a page, she envies my mind,
they do not get along at times,
through chatter and character building
I'm living proof that art is a passion,
the words often expresses itself,
I just control the hand that writes the words,
all while playing mediator between
my mind and my pen
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5761
Posted: March 15, 2006 7:21 AM PST; Last modified: March 15, 2006 7:21 AM PST
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So...what's with this general trend of people posting and not commenting on anyone else's works?