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Tidal (Free verse) by helenwales

I've got to get in Stranded at the asylum Monday brings a job Hot sand burns my toes Cigarette stuck to my lip I like flying kites The cusp of summer Chill of the ocean's cold soul Lost penguin swims alone Bob went to the beach He liked brown nubile bodies Undies in my crack Streamers dreamers fly Dinosaurs in the distance Sharing with my friend A big fat tummy A big fat bum blocks the sun I don't like this one Coopers on the beach The original pale ale Matches Heather's thongs Family fermented Collection depot when due Drinks vols brews and pissed Spongey, thick and new Karki green and fashionable Five bucks a bargain true Gradually worsening Bloody hell Adelle Cheese on the table I nurse my beer alone I don't like olives! Sprinkler hitting ground Move it back to the right spot Thirsty lawn exhales Facemask burning tight Red blotches cover my cheeks Haiku fly in drink J/H/H/H

Dovina 23-Oct-06/2:40 PM
Probably right.




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