Re: a comment on Hallelujah by hungry_shepherd	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	15-Mar-07/1:45 AM
A suprisingly brittle coat of vicar discharge
Re: May Sinners Rot In Fucking Hell! by Sing4Jesus!	Shardik 76.170.36.27	14-Mar-07/8:28 PM
"Jew green hill" That was my favorite line. Hungary certainly is teeing up to be a lovely... Situation. I suppose even the Jews occasionally have a hard time hiding their obvious hatred of everyone but themselves.
Re: Two Cunts by mr cunt	Shardik 76.170.36.27	14-Mar-07/8:24 PM
lol
Re: a comment on Inspire Me by Blindpoetry	Blindpoetry 70.172.227.111	14-Mar-07/7:06 PM
Good Lord, your timing is impeccable.
Re: a comment on A Fake Hollywood by Blindpoetry	Blindpoetry 70.172.227.111	14-Mar-07/7:04 PM
I might have given your comment a thought two years ago.
Re: Two Cunts by mr cunt	Shuushin 65.175.177.241	14-Mar-07/6:46 PM
the only one I've actually read past the first line
Re: a comment on Jess and Andrea during english class by jesslew	jesslew 65.95.232.26	14-Mar-07/5:57 PM
no Andrea is a girl as well...saying "have my children" does not actually mean what it seems like.
Re: a comment on Settling In by jessicazee	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 63.212.164.106	14-Mar-07/4:15 PM
A highly elderly arse
Re: a comment on A Lament For Alice by hungry_shepherd	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 63.212.164.106	14-Mar-07/4:14 PM
A disgustingly poorly-tested moustache sausage.
Re: a comment on Hallelujah by hungry_shepherd	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 63.212.164.106	14-Mar-07/4:08 PM
A foetus-mounted lacquered tramp beard supplied with a sausage extractor.
Re: The Greek Philosopher Poem; cutting wrists in the bathtub by cheese.doodles	<{Baba^Yaga}> 66.47.195.202	14-Mar-07/3:52 PM
your title is ass, but the poem was nice.
Re: A Fake Hollywood by Blindpoetry	cheese.doodles 70.52.171.118	14-Mar-07/3:05 PM
Your irritating rhyme scheme makes this nearly unreadable.
Re: Inspire Me by Blindpoetry	cheese.doodles 70.52.171.118	14-Mar-07/3:02 PM
Good Lord, this is angsty. Sounds like lyrics for an emo band.
Re: I smell coffee by Princess_Snowflake	cheese.doodles 70.52.171.118	14-Mar-07/3:01 PM
grating due to repetition and grammatically incorrect.
Re: a comment on Business As Usual (Nothing Personal) by poetry_rancour	Dovina 75.82.86.162	14-Mar-07/2:57 PM
Try adding something like: Downsize to the heart and lungs/And don’t forget the tasty brain
Re: a comment on Business As Usual (Nothing Personal) by poetry_rancour	poetry_rancour 70.48.153.21	14-Mar-07/2:32 PM
I understand. I was angry that day. A company I worked for had fired an associate of mine (did the same to me a few months later). It is about "downsizing", shedding staff, losing FTE's. How long can a company continue letting people go before there is nothing left of the company? My apologies. The poem obviously needs work....but the anger has gone so I fear it will remain as is.
Re: Jess and Andrea during english class by jesslew	Dovina 75.82.86.162	14-Mar-07/1:03 PM
Jess is a woman (can have children) apparently by Andrea, a man. Then Andrea will soon be a mom. Nice. At least the lines are 5-7-5.
Re: Wait by MacFrantic	Dovina 75.82.86.162	14-Mar-07/12:57 PM
Sung, it might move me, but just reading, it seems like repetitive meander without arriving.
Re: You Could Be A Winner by poetry_rancour	Dovina 75.82.86.162	14-Mar-07/12:53 PM
Yep, those are about equal odds. "dividend" works, but "strife"? Maybe something more fatal.
Re: Business As Usual (Nothing Personal) by poetry_rancour	Dovina 75.82.86.162	14-Mar-07/12:49 PM
Sorry, I don't picture this beast.