poemranker ::The Greek Philosopher Poem; cutting wrists in the bathtub by cheese.doodles

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The Greek Philosopher Poem; cutting wrists in the bathtub

by cheese.doodles

Member since 2007 · Posted 14 Mar 2007 · 3 comments

Curling out A bright red vine Fast growing, twining Soon overgrown, choking the source And filling the tub

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[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> 14-Mar-07/3:52 PM Reply
your title is ass, but the poem was nice.
[7] richa 15-Mar-07/11:50 AM Reply
I cut my wrists as a philosopher. I used Occam's razor.
[7] richa 15-Mar-07/11:52 AM Reply
I don't really see choking as appropriate. Close to a neat metaphor here.