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The Greek Philosopher Poem; cutting wrists in the bathtub (Free verse) by cheese.doodles

Curling out A bright red vine Fast growing, twining Soon overgrown, choking the source And filling the tub

richa 15-Mar-07/11:52 AM
I don't really see choking as appropriate. Close to a neat metaphor here.




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