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Wait (Lyric) by MacFrantic
This is me dying And I’m smiling Are you surprised? Isn’t it reviling? I think we made it Just give me your hand Consecrated Wait How long have I waited? Wait I’m becoming faded So you’ve picked up And you’ve shipped out Can you slam the door On your way out? I think you hate it Just give me the word And I’ll hate it too Wait How long have I waited? Wait I’m becoming faded You were eighteen It was raining I stood outside For you, waiting I think you should say it Cause it’s strong But we couldn’t save it Wait How long have I waited? Wait I’m becoming faded My eyes are clouded but my head is clear You’re mouth is moving but I cannot hear I feel your arms wrapped around my chest And as we embrace I can feel what’s next But wait How long have I waited? Wait wait wait I’m becoming faded The next day Will come some day Can’t you see We’ve come such a long way? We never made it And the distance Between us has faded Wait How long have I waited? Wait How long have I waited? Wait...

Up the ladder: Turn the Switch
Down the ladder: Outliers

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9177
Posted: March 14, 2007 2:30 AM PDT; Last modified: March 14, 2007 2:30 AM PDT
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[7] Dovina @ 75.82.86.162 | 14-Mar-07/12:57 PM | Reply
Sung, it might move me, but just reading, it seems like repetitive meander without arriving.
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