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You Could Be A Winner (Other) by poetry_rancour
Each wish Paid down In the lottery of life Has an equal chance of paying Either dividend or strife You might be struck by lightning Or win a million when, You tear your ticket open Sorry, try again.

Up the ladder: Greyhound Bus
Down the ladder: Working Title

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9298
Posted: March 14, 2007 7:48 AM PDT; Last modified: March 14, 2007 7:48 AM PDT
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[7] Dovina @ 75.82.86.162 | 14-Mar-07/12:53 PM | Reply
Yep, those are about equal odds. "dividend" works, but "strife"? Maybe something more fatal.
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