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Hallelujah (Lyric) by hungry_shepherd
i held her close, i held her tight
i held her in the trembling candlelight
i broke through her feigned defences
her halfhearted virtuous fight
her perfume it soaked my senses
some cheap exotic delight
hallelujah
i barely knew her
through the satin sheets she tore
i embraced her every subtle flaw
my hand moved across her shoulder
her peignor fell to the floor
i promised i'd forever hold her
my lover, my redeemer, my whore
hallelujah
i barely knew her
to her sanctum sanctorum i stole
where she hid both diamond and coal
i stripped her down, made her devils bare
but they only held a minor role
i listened to her silent prayer
and i read her sacred scroll
hallelujah
i barely knew her
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5
Weighted score: 4.8814354
Overall Rank: 9959
Posted: March 10, 2007 6:49 AM PST; Last modified: March 10, 2007 6:49 AM PST
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