Re: Street Preacher by Dovina	Engelbert Humpalot 127.0.0.1	31-Dec-20/11:24 AM
Dreary piffle. I could shit a better poem.
Re: The Symbol by Dovina	Engelbert Humpalot 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	31-Dec-20/11:23 AM
Boring tripe.
Re: Poemranker is Back! by Dovina	Engelbert Humpalot 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	31-Dec-20/11:22 AM
Fucking useless
Re: a comment on the product of repetition by nentwined	nentwined 127.0.0.1	30-Dec-20/11:55 AM
Yeah, the lack of specificity in the poem makes it not stick to the wall quite as well, asking the reader to fill that in/explore. All or any of the above.
Re: the product of repetition by nentwined	Jill Stockinger 127.0.0.1	29-Dec-20/4:22 PM
Cutesy. I see this poem as "a product of repetition".
Re: of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT	Jill Stockinger 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	29-Dec-20/4:14 PM
its- no apostrophe in this case. In the first stanza, I'd recommend dropping all the periods except for the last one in that stanza.
Re: Safe haven by INTRANSIT	Jill Stockinger 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	29-Dec-20/4:11 PM
Enjoyed the humor!
Re: 6.387 seconds by INTRANSIT	Jill Stockinger 127.0.0.1	29-Dec-20/4:08 PM
I think the rocketship Almost took off but failed. Liked the concrete imagery.
Re: This morning by INTRANSIT	Jill Stockinger 127.0.0.1	29-Dec-20/4:06 PM
nice conceit!
Re: Table for 1 by INTRANSIT	Jill Stockinger 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	29-Dec-20/4:06 PM
Evocative. Loneliness saturates the poem.
Re: Refulgent by INTRANSIT	Jill Stockinger 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	29-Dec-20/4:04 PM
Lovely use of the word hangles (to hang from a hook...) I would remove the comma between lighthouse and clutching- no comma needed. Beautiful poem. Really well done.
Re: the product of repetition by nentwined	Dovina 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	29-Dec-20/2:11 PM
Judging from link link in your comment, I think that repetition in your poem refers to musical repetition. Otherwise, I would be drawn to assembly lines or women who don't listen and simply repeat themselves. And what is the product of the musical repetition? You don't say. Frost says, "and many miles before I sleep" "and many miles before I sleep" and that works for me. It changes the doer, revises his attitude.
Re: Missing by Jill Stockinger	Dovina 127.0.0.1	29-Dec-20/2:03 PM
For all the comments you have left here in the past few days, most of them finding some good, refusing to inflict a harsh remark, I wish you finding stars in dark skies, finding love that holds, and find the "you" you are looking for.
Re: Aztec Priest by Jill Stockinger	Dovina 127.0.0.1	29-Dec-20/2:00 PM
Your love is something I do not want. Take him. Do what you want. But this sounds codependent and mutually destructive. Nevertheless, you've said it well.
Re: Cockroaches by Jill Stockinger	Dovina 127.0.0.1	29-Dec-20/1:57 PM
I imagine this being about poems that write, usually after considerable wine, and read the next day before they have escaped to somewhere, and they are like cockroaches--slimy infectious creatures. I keep them though, tuck them away for they are part of me, and in the right light and the right revision might become. Become what? Nothing probably, but who knows.
Re: the product of repetition by nentwined	nentwined 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	29-Dec-20/11:52 AM
https://madewithcollab.com/collab/W00k80w00h1
Re: For my wife by INTRANSIT	Jill Stockinger 127.0.0.1	28-Dec-20/5:18 PM
dove's wing needs an apostrophe
Re: The consistency of frailty by INTRANSIT	Jill Stockinger 127.0.0.1	28-Dec-20/5:12 PM
(gurney)
Re: Grind by INTRANSIT	Jill Stockinger 127.0.0.1	28-Dec-20/5:06 PM
Love the last 2 lines.
Re: Poem on a face by INTRANSIT	Jill Stockinger 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	28-Dec-20/5:03 PM
He WAS caged for treason.