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Missing (Free verse) by Jill Stockinger I look up in the night
but all the polluting lights
shining in this city, those
pale imitations of the stars,
block the stars from view
just as my grief blocks feeling
joy in my memories.
Missing stars.
Missing love.
Missing you.
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Posted: December 28, 2020 2:01 PM PST; Last modified: December 28, 2020 2:01 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.1897035 Overall Rank: 4785 Comments:
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Dovina @ 127.0.0.1
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29-Dec-20/2:03 PM
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For all the comments you have left here in the past few days, most of them finding some good, refusing to inflict a harsh remark, I wish you finding stars in dark skies, finding love that holds, and find the "you" you are looking for.
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