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Table for 1 (Haiku) by INTRANSIT
Brown long neck bottle. Sounds of a foghorn blowing as label is ripped.

Up the ladder: bruised butterfly
Down the ladder: Landscapes In The Sky

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.089402
Overall Rank: 6261
Posted: April 22, 2003 6:02 PM PDT; Last modified: April 22, 2003 6:02 PM PDT
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[7] Jill Stockinger @ 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 | 29-Dec-20/4:06 PM | Reply
Evocative. Loneliness saturates the poem.
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