ummmmm

potential is the word.

yea, poets really do find beauty in the smallest things

It seems hand in hand we fall through our hopes and fears. This gave me shivers

Further more you have not really said anything new, which means you have to say it in a memorable way to make your effort worth while, communication and especially poetry is not just ideas in words, but ideas/feelings in words that are well used, shaped and polished like a gem until they shine.

I also think a better title, or more clarification in the poem would be in order.

Fishy.

What is wang zhenghui?

Yea, umm, no. kinda lost it somewhere around the third stanza, or was it the first?

I would have to agree w/ Dovina, The crappy title makes me expect a crappy poem, You have a good image here, but you need to knead it a little more.

I have enjoyed this immensly, and you danced around many of the edges I walk in life. Well written, well thought out. Definite-10-

Why can't she be the yellow and you the blue, or maybe purple?

Sometimes separation is the only avenue.

Actually, my eyes are blue-green.

'Creep in to her in the night" Into her room or back to the uterus? "And settle for knowing she knows" possibly "And settle for knowing she knows more." Does this change what you are saying or make it clearer? -8- maybe a -10- if I were not confused by those two lines.

An essay. A statement of position. Not a poem. I agree with you.